短文改錯inthegeneral

短文改錯inthegeneral篇一：高中英語短文改錯,附答案

I have a good friend who’s name is Liu Mei. She is our monitor and one of the excellent student in our class. Although she is clever, but she works very hard. We have a lot on common and have a lot to talk about. One evening she told me that something happened when her parents was out. She was doing her homeworks one Sunday morning when she smelt something burning. She stopped look out of the window and find a cloud of smoke coming out of her neighbour’s house. She called 119 immediate. Ten minutes later, the firemen came and put out fire. Her neighbour was very thankful for her help.

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I went to see the film after supper. On my way the cinema, I met an English woman, who lost her way. I gave up the chance see the film and took her to her hotel. While go there, I told her about great changes that had been taken place in the past few years and she had told me anything about her country. Although I missed the film, I still felt very happy, for I had not only helped her out of trouble but practise my spoken English. If I had not worked hard on English, I would have been able to help him.

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Dear Ralph,

I'm a senior student. I'm getting well with a boy in my class. But I have fallen in love with him for almost half a year. He is shy boy, so I wrote him a letter first to express my feeling. He wrote back. In his letter he said, "We are students. Our task is study hard. Let us to wait and see whether we have some chance after graduation." So after graduation I telephoned to him, ask him about going out. But he said he didn't want to. He just wanted to sleep and watched TV. What do you think I should do? Do you think I should continue to love him and give up?

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Dear Bob,

Hello. I learn about you from my English teacher, Miss Fang. I’d like to your penfriend, and get to know more about your country.

First, let me tell you something more about myself. My name is Li Hua. I live in Beijing, where is the capital of China. I go to Hongqi Middle School. We study quite a few subject, such as maths, Chinese, English and physics. I use to play ping-pong a lot on my spare time, but now I am interesting in football. Do you play any ball games? What your favorite sport? I look forward to hear from you soon.

Yours,Li Hua

Two months ago, I went to abroad for further study. Before I left, I was given a lot present. Among them， there were two presents which were really interested me. My sister buys me a book with color pictures about body language and with words about customs of different country in them. My brother gave me a note which read, “My present has put in your bedroom.” When I hurried into my bedroom, I found a box, in that there was an electronic dictionary. I was very glad but a few surprised to receive these two presents.

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Dear Li Ming,

I have received your letter yesterday. Don’t worry about you. I’m getting along well with my research works in the lab. But, to my surprising, you say you will give up learn English. The reason is that you have not done well in it recently and you have lost interesting. I’m afraid I can’t agree with you. I know it is not easy to learn English, and English is widely used in the world today and it will be important tool in your future work. Besides, it is becoming more and more important at our daily life. If you study hard, you will succeed. Do remember where is a will, there is a way.

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Some students don’t like talking about their parents often as if their parents love them very much. Are you going on well with your parents? You and your parents will be very happy if you can be friend. Here are some way to have a good talk with them. Find a good time to talk, like when you’re eating dinner, going out for walk and watching TV. Tell them something you’re interested in, or ask them about their life when they are young. They love to talk about our past! Meet them face to face and listen to them carefully. Be honesty, and your parents will trust you more.

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One afternoon Jack is walking down a river along. It was very cold day and on the river few boats could be seen．When he stopped on a bridge and look down, he saw a terrible scene. A boy fell of a canoe(獨木舟) and was struggling in the water．Without think about herself, Jack jumped into the river and to save the boy． He was about to drag（拖） the boy to the river bank then he saw some people stand in a motor boat under the bridge． One of them stared Jack and said angrily, “They are making a film and you’ve spoiled a whole afternoon’s work!”

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改錯一：who's 改為whose 2.正確 3.去掉but 4.on改為in 5.parents后加were 6.homeworks改為homework 7.stopped后加to 8.find改為found 9.immediate改為immediately 10.fire前加the

改錯二： the改為a 2.正確 3.see前加to 4.go改為going 5.去掉been 6.

去掉had 7.去掉but

8.去掉had 9.on改為at 10.him改為her

改錯三：1.getting 后加on或along 2.fallen改為been 3.shy前加a 4.feeling改為feelings 當情感講時feeling常用單數(shù) 5.study前加to或study改為studying 6.去掉to 7.去掉to 8.watched改為watch 9正確 10.and改為or

改錯四：1. learn 改為 learnt或learned。2. to 后加 be 或 become。3. 刪去more。第一次告訴 Bob 關(guān)于自己的一些事情， 此處用 more 不合邏輯。4. where 改為 which。在此非限定性定語從句中， 關(guān)系詞在從句中作主語， 故用 which。5. 此行無錯。6. subject 改為 subjects。quits a few 意為“相當多”， 修飾可數(shù)名詞復數(shù)。7. use 改為 used。據(jù)下文 but now 可知， 此處應用used to do 表示“過去常常 做某事”。8. interesting 改為 interested。be interested in?為固定短語， “對??感興趣”。9. What 后加 is。此句無謂語。10. hear 改為 hearing。look forward to doing sth.為固定短語。

改錯五：答案：

76．去掉to 短語錯誤。go abroad“出國”。

77．present→presents 名詞的數(shù)錯誤。present“禮物”，是可數(shù)名詞。

78．去掉第二個were 動詞錯誤。interest在此是及物動詞用法，意為“使??感興趣”。be interested in“對??感興趣”。

79．buys→bought 時態(tài)錯誤。由全文可知，用一般過去時態(tài)。

80．√

81．them→it 代詞錯誤。在這本書里有關(guān)于肢體語言的圖片和不同國家的語言習俗。用it指代這本書。

82．put前加been 語態(tài)錯誤。我的禮物被放在了你的臥室里了。禮物是被放在臥室里，所以用被動語態(tài)。

83．that→which 定語從句關(guān)系詞錯誤。介詞后用which，不用that。

84．but→and 連接邏輯錯誤。前后是并列關(guān)系而非轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系。

85．few→little 混淆錯誤。a little 與 little 可以用作副詞， 表示“有點”“稍稍” ，修飾動詞、副詞、形容詞或介詞短語。如：He is a little tired.他有點累了。而a few不可用作副詞。

改錯五 1.have去掉2.about后的you改為me 3.works→work 4.learn→learning

5.recent→recently 6.interesting→interest 7.English后的and改為but 8.be后加an

9.at→in 10.where后加there

改錯六41. about→with/to 根據(jù)句意，可知此處是表達“和父母交談”，而不是“談論父母”。

42. as→even if 意為“好像”，與句意不符；根據(jù)句意，此處應是表達讓步關(guān)系。故用even if ,意為“即使”。

43. going→getting get along well with 是固定短語，意為“和…相片融洽”。

44. √

45. way→ways some在此處修飾可數(shù)名詞復數(shù)。

46. walk前加a go out for a walk意為“出去散步”

47. and→or 此處表選擇關(guān)系。

48. are→were “他們年輕時候”應用動詞的過去式。

49. our→their 和they保持一致。

50. honesty→honest 形容詞honest 作表語。

短文改錯inthegeneral篇二：短文改錯題訓練

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Attention, please, everyone.

rain tonight. Make sure to shut windows and doors until you leave classrooms. The sports meet when After it becomes fine, we'll make announcement. We will have classes Wednesday as usually. Since it is tomorrow, please dress on more your umbrellas open while riding.

短文改錯題 2Dear Peter,

Thanks very much

inviting me to your birthday on Sunday. I'd like very nuch but I had an examination Monday morning. It is a fail it. I'll spend all the So I'm really sorry that I won't to wish you wonderful time birthday. Happy birthday, Peter, many happy return of the day. 短文改錯題 3

I went fishing with my father on last Sunday. We started at daybreak. Before

that we could see fish swimming. It is a good place for fishing.

After the few minutes' preparation, we sat down and began fishing. An hour passes, but I didn't get a single fish. I felt very disappointing. I often lifted the fishing rod, because I almost lost my patient. On the other side of the stream, my father had got lots fish. I went up to him and asked for some advice. With his help, we got some fish, too. How happy I was!

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During the weekend I traveled by the air for the first time in my life. I generally travel by train or by bus. It's all cheaper and safer. But this was

a short journey. In the begining I didn't fall happy, but this feeling wasn't last long. The journey was very exciting. I was soon high up in the sky among the cloud. The view of mountains, fields and rivers were interesting.

I enjoyed my short and comfortably trip very much. This experience has been shown that traveling by air is actually safest way of making journeys.

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It was Sunday today. Early in the morning my classmate and I went to the park by bus to plant trees. As soon as we got there, we began work. Some were digging, some planted, and there were still some watering. Both of us were trying hard to plant as much as we could. Each of us was afraid of falling behind. After

work, we were all wet over. Looking at lines of young trees, we forgot our tiredness. We came back at 12 o'clock. It is not only does us a lot of good, but also benefit the people.

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I often read English aloud and trying to learn something important in heart. It helps me remember what I have learned and form good habit of thinking in English. I listen a lot and communicate with the others in English. In this way, I improved both my listening ability and my speaking English. I keep a diary in English every day and my written English is becoming better and better. I also try my best master the necessary grammar knowledge. By this means, I can express me correctly. That's why I have been learning English.

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"I am so excited. I have not words to describe that I saw Beckham today," said Liao Wending, a factory worker who took the

day off see the team arrive. "I'm so moving, I was screaming and shouting as he walked by." Fans on white Real Madrid T-shirts reached out toward the players as they got close to the training camp. Some players stopped to shake hand. Soccer is very popularly in China, with tens of millions of fans is following 15 teams in the country's top league or dozens of smaller clubs. China has sent players to British team. Though few had spent time in China, Beckham and other foreign stars have already celebrated here.

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The Dead Sea is really a larger lake. The river Jordan flows into it. It's surface has an area of over a thousand square kilometers. Because there is no outlet and the weather is very hot, the water is slowly flowing up, the water in the sea has unpleasant smell and a very salty bitter taste. It is full with salt and other minerals. Human bodies will not sink in it. People can sit up there and to read newspapers without sinking, but it is not a good place for swimming, so the water is bad for the skin. No alive things can live in it. That is why it called the Dead Sea.

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Paul was in hospital. Jesse went to see him Last week, Jesse heard of his friend on hours began. He found out Paul in a nice 7:30 one evening when the visiting room who many had with another patients, an old man, on magazines the same and ill cards as Paul. from There are him a feeling that table he near the Paul's bed. Paul friends told medicine every third hour and getting lots much had good a now. high He fever was and taking was of rest. After their talking for while, some of The small room became too crowding. Jesse decided the old man's friends came in to visit. to leave. Jesse was glad that Paul enjoyed his visit.

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The Problem with Television

Now I can't watch many television but a few yeas ago I was used to watch it every night. I was often a little tired after a day's work and watch TV demands very little effort. Unfortunate, there are too many people among my family. Some wanted to see the programme while others preferred another. I am happy with any programme but the others spent a lot time arguing and there was no way of settling the matter except by selling the set. Now someone at home reads instead. 短文改錯題 11

I don't often lose things and I especially careful with money. So I was very surprising when I reached at my wallet and found it wasn't there. At first, I thought it was possible that I must have forgotten it at home. Then I remembered taking it out to pay for the taxi, so I knew I have it with me just after I walked into the restaurant. I wondered that it was possible that it could have slipped out off

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My friend Kate was a pretty girl whose sweet voice drew others’ attentions. Last year, she left to study at a music school. Yesterday she called to say that she wants to see me but not at my house. So we fixed a time and a place and then hung. Today I met her at a given time and place. Greatly to my surprise, I found her so much changing. She looked very sorrowful and worrying. She said she had made such little progress that she was almost hopeless of success. She wondered that whether she had been wasting her time doing nothing. I knew she just needed some encouragement. So I did what I could persuade her to gain her courage again.

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I went out to see a film with my brother after supper. On our way to the cinema ,we meet an American girl named Alice she had got lost and looked very anxious. We went up to see that was the matter. We then took him to the hotel. While going there, we told her the great changes that had been taken place in our country in the past few years and Alice told us a lot about youth in America. Although we missed the film, but we felt very happy for we had not only helped Alice get out of troubles also knew something about the States. We see English can strength understanding and friendship 短文改錯題 14

The Olympic Banner is made of five crossed rings with five different colour: blue, yellow, black, green and red. They stand as the Unity of the five continents and the meeting of sportsmen all over the world at the Olympic Games with just and open-minded attitude and friend spirit. The Olympic Games have been held each four years in the world's great city. All the greatest sports men and players took part in the Olympic Games. The only prizes silver and copper medals.

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Like many other places, our hometown is either facing the problem of pollution. Unfortunately, people there have realized the importance of protection the natural environment. Factories have been taken measures to stop pouring polluted water into the rivers. The citizens no longer put waste, such as rubbish or human waste into the rivers. Every year, a great number trees are planted. As a result, the water in the rivers are becoming cleaner and cleaner. The hills around the city were covered with green trees and the air there is much more fresher than before.

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Dear Grandma,

Thank you for your letter and the check. It was really kind for you to send me such much money. I was so glad to receive them. I spend one week at an ecology summer camp in the countryside. Yes, we did see a snake. Five of the boys drove them away. I was excited when they did it. Thank you for your good wish about my that knee. That afternoon, after I returned to school, I fell over on the stairs. It was not seriously and it is getting better now. Since I very interested in nature, I’ve decided to spend the money you sent me on a telescope. I can use it observe natural things. Will that be all right? I’m waiting for your reply.Yours,

Li Ping

短文改錯題 17Dear friends,

How time flies! It has been one year after Miss Green came to our school. Today we gather here to have a farewell meeting. Our English teacher Miss Green is going to leave her post and return her country, the United States. During her stay there, she has helped us a lot with our English and we greatly appreciated her help. We are deep impressed by her lessons as they are so lively and interesting. We feel very sorry that she has to leave for our school. I’m sure we will miss her very much. I do hope we will keep touch with each other in the day that are coming. Now let’s hope Miss Green good luck and a pleasant journey.That’s all. Thank you.

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Hello. You’ve no idea that how much I’m missing you! Why hadn’t you written to me for such a long time? Are you all right recently? My summer’s holidays have already started. What about yours? You said last time when you would pay a visit to my city, did you still remember? Will you be able to carry your plan this summer? Please write to me all about 短文改錯題 21

I often read English aloud and trying to learn something important in heart. It helps me remember what I have learned and form good habit of thinking in English.I listen a lot and communicate with other in English．In this way， I have improved both my listening ability or my speaking English．I keep a diary in English every day and my written English 短文改錯題 24

Fang Tong is 34 years old, an actor, director and teacher of Beijing Opera Theatre. Most of his students are from other part of China and have come to Beijing at a very young age of sixteen or seventeen.He hopes create an environment for his students that

it is much more relaxing than the one he used to study in. He thought that an actor should relax that so that I can be well preparing ahead of the time if you do come. As you know, I’m fond of collecting stamps very much. Could you send me some American stamps if possibly? With love to you.

短文改錯題 19 Dear Tom,

I was glad to accept your letter of May 22th. I don’t expect that you would answer my letter so soon. You suggested in your letter that I must read more. I agree with you. It is true that one need to read a lot to improve his reading ability. It is the same like swimming. One can’t learn to swim if he goes and swims in the water. So this summer I am going to get down to read some books. Although I am not the kind person who always does things according to his plan, but I will try my best.

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I’m very thank to you for inviting me to stay with you in Beijing in the coming summer vacation. I have been dreamed of seeing you again so that I can get more help from you in my English learning. And I’m afraid I cannot go to your place in this summer. I’ve promised my grandmother, she lives in the country, to spend this summer with her. She misses me too much that I find difficult to refuse her request. I’m busy with preparing for my examinations in present．Best wishes.

is becoming better and better． I also try my best master the necessary grammar knowledge． By this means，I can express me correctly． That’s why I have been 1earning English.

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Last Sunday I saw the worst storm in years. It came sudden and went on for over three hours. After lunch, I went into my room to have a rest. The air was hotter, and all is quiet. Then a strong wind started to blow into my room. Pieces of paper on my desk flew high into the air and some flew out the open window. As I ran out to

catch them, big drop of rain began to fall. When I came back into house, it was raining harder and harder. I tried very hard to close the window. Then I heard a loudly crashing(碰撞的)sound from the back of the house. When I ran out to find that a big tree had fallen down and broke the top of the back room. 短文改錯題 23

I have been planning to join in our college basketball team next year, so now I am spending as more time as I can with other people who likes to play. They are teaching me the most important rules and technologies of the game, and I am getting the better all the time. We have a neighborhood team that play against other teams in the area. One of my neighbors is helping rest of us improve our skills. Tonight we are playing against one of the best teams in the city, and I think we can beat them if we won't make any mistakes.

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himself when performing. Yet his students deep respect him and he never needs to raise his voice in order to be hearing . For his opinion, actors should go on even when they feel they have made a mistake in their performances because the moment is already gone but people can never be back to it. So art is always changing and developing.

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Today is Sunday, I have been studying all day long. On the morning, I had a dry breakfast. We have no water to drink because the water supply has cut off. The water had come back in the evening. I did math then. I didn't stop after 12 Then I went to my Sunday English Class .After a long and tired class for more than two hours, I got to home. Some work had been done but some hadn't. I must review all my subject such as the Sciences, the Humanities, which include Chinese, English, Politics and History as w(轉(zhuǎn) 載 于:www.zuancaijixie.com 蒲 公英文 摘:短文改錯inthegeneral)ell. That's terribly! Especially when there was no water.

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loud I was recent told that hard of music hearing. is gradually listening I'm sure making it has turn her radio down. When she gave his discovered own room. Now a scientist have they strange a effects certain on electronic rats. He with legs break trembled. down, almost Then it paralyze(is simply 癱wonder my neighbor someday. if the same thing

will happen

短文改錯題 27 Dear Ralph,

I'm a senior student. I have be in love with a boy for three years. But he is a shy boy, so I wrote him a letter firstly to express my feeling. And he wrote back me. In his letter he said, "We are students. Our task is study. Let us wait to see until we have any chance after graduation." So after graduation I telephoned to him, asking him about go out. But he said he didn't want to. He just wanted to sleep and watched TV. What do you think I should do? Do you think I should continue to love him and give up, Sheila. 短文改錯題 28

Before leaving the class, the teacher, Miss White, said to her class, "Don't leave your seats. Read your books on yourselves. You would study hard and be good students." As soon as the teacher went away, the classroom becoming noisy.

One boy drew a picture of the teacher on the blackboard. Another boy began to make face just to make the other students to laugh. The boy put his finger close to his mouth and tell the class that Miss White is coming back. All the students sat down their seats and the classroom became quiet again. The door open and in came Miss White.

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books. So he had to borrow them from rich man lived far away. The boy tried hard to finish read the books returned them to the owner within giving time. So the rich man was lending him any of the books he them. In this way he read a lot late became a well-known writer of time. However, the rich man's son little knowledge.

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Our four-years-old son came into the house proudly to showed me a caterpillar(毛毛蟲)that was crawling up

his arm. Trying hard to hiding my nauseating feeling(掩飾我的惡心), I said, "Mark, why don't you take them back outside. Its mother will be looking for it, but it will miss its mother. " I was feeling rather pleasing at the way I had handled the situation. And a few minutes later Mark returned back to the house with two caterpillars and said excitedly , "Look, I founded the mother!"

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Like most of my schoolmates, I have neither brothers nor sisters---in any other words, I am an only child. My parents love me dearly of course and will do all they can make sure that I get a good education. They did not want me to do any work at family; they want me to devote all my time to my studies so that I'll get good marks in all my subject. We may be one family and live under a same roof, but we do not seem to get much time to talk about together. It looks as if my parents treat me

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March22nd , Tuesday , cloudy

I watch TV until nearly 12 o clock, so I could not go over my lessons. This morning I got up very late that I had to hurry school without breakfast yet. I was late of the first class . When I entered the classroom, the maths teacher had to stop explaining an important problem, and all the eyes fixed upon me . My face turned to red. Something even worse happened to me in the English class. The teacher asked me to recite the text, but I could speak nothing but Sorry , as I did not spend any time preparing my lessons . The teacher looked at me with his coldly eyes, I stood at my bench without daring to raise my head . What a terrible day I had! I will never do anything like this.

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A king liked to write

One day, the king showed some stories with a famous writer. king felt pity for the writer and him freely. When the him some stories and asked how thought them.The writer into the soldiers and said, "Take back prison. "

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At beginning of term I introduced my teacher for my parents. Our teacher Mr. Wang asked my parents of my summer holiday. To my parents' opinion I have a good time with my classmates. I told my teacher that I had finished homeworks at home. Then I helped my father in the farm.

We went on work by the lights of the tractors . Father had only two and three young men working for him at harvest time.

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Time flies as an arrow. I'm

I realized it. It is only a little more three months before I graduate my lessons in order to take the entrance examination. I hope to go universities not only in China but also the world. I'll try my best to turn dream to reality. Most of my are also studying very hard to enter a very good university college.

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Once, lately at night,

Englishman came out of his room into room, and a few minutes later he into the passage again and once asked the servant a glass of water.

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I've a friend who has a big

dog is named Jack. Every afternoon my friend takes Jack a the park very well. One Sunday a man dropped in my friend. He stayed long time. He talked and talked. his walk, but the visitor still sat 短文改錯題 42

and for a certain length of time. seem to have natural clock inside that tells them when sleeping. their regular sleep, cats take naps(打盹also take cat nap. The habit would good for people's health. Cat Englishman would come out of his man what he was doing with the "Nothing," answered he calmly. simply that the room is on fire.

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I gave my housekeeper an old pair trousers to wash and went in the study to read. My housekeeper usually looks through my pocket before wash my clothes, but for some reasons she failed to do so this time. As I was reading, I suddenly remember that there was

a five-pounds note in the back pocket of the trousers I had told her to wash it. I dropped my book and rushed into the bathroom, and it was too late. My housekeeper says that my trousers had been in the washing machine for fifteen minutes already.

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One afternoon on April, 1912 ,

themselves. The next day was even was night. Suddenly, the man on shouting "Look out! Iceberg!" It was late, a ship hit the iceberg and came to ship started to go down.

and looked him.But the visitor none attention. He continued Finally Jack could stand it no longer. hold the visitor's hat in his mouth. 短文改錯題 40 June 12,Sunday Fine

Today is Sunday, I didn't get up early

as usually. In the morning after I finished my homework, I do some washing. Then I telephoned one of my classmate and invited him to see a film. And unfortunately, when we got to the cinema at 3:00 p.m. we found all the tickets

had sold out. Then we went back to school and played the football. After this, when we were about to go home, we saw our English teacher, Mr. Wang, coming into the school gate. He told us we have made great progress in English this term. He also suggested that we should read more and wrote more. We promised him that we would listen his advice. 短文改錯題 41

In autumn of 1935,when I was a

young man, I was traveling in north of

Indian. One evening, after hunting in the

forest all day, I was returning to the place

which I had put up my tent. It was getting dark, but I was walking along a road. Suddenly I saw two eye glaring at me from among the trees. What can I do?

Should I jump into the river and help to

save my life by swimming. I looked at the

right. In the river there had a big crocodile waiting to welcome me with its mouth was wide open.

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cats have moods(情緒) like these people, scientists believe that people improve their moods with People might become more happier and active.

短文改錯題 43

A MAN shot two students died and wounded five other at an Australian university on Monday, after he

was overpowered by classmates of the victims (受害者)The two dead were both male of Asian-appearance in his early 20s. The others have being treated for minor(未成年的)injuries. The man, in his mid-30s and of Asian appearance, was seized several students in classroom at Monash University, Melbourne and was late arrested.

短文改錯題 44

When I first learned to write in English , I ran into much difficulties. The main problem was in that I always thought in Chinese and tried to translate anything into English. My teacher advised me to keep my diary. I followed her advice and should put down 100 words or so each day. Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was learning to express me in simple English.

One day I wrote a little story and showed to my teacher. He liked it very much and reads it to the class. All said the story was a good one. Their word were a great encouragement to me .

短文改錯inthegeneral篇三：2013年短文改錯匯編

短文改錯專題訓練及解析

(1)

My parents live in the country. They keep a dog calling Ah Fu. One day my parent went to work in the fields taking my little sister with Ah Fu along. While they working, my sister walked to the river nearby. Ah Fu followed her there. She was trying to pick a flower while she fell into the river. Ah Fu barked and jumped to the water immediate. When my parents heard Ah Fu barking they ran to the river. They saw Ah Fu swimming towards the bank carried my little sister. My parents praised Ah Fu warm. It was our brave Ah Fu who had saved my little sister.

(2)

A few days before my brother and I went to the cinema by bicycle. My brother was riding with me seating on the seat behind. As we came to the crossroad, a young man and a girl came up and stopped us. ‘We've found you long last,’ they said. And we don't know them. Point to a policeman not far away, the young man explained, ‘He stopped us about half hour ago and made us to catch the next offender. So come on, stand here. Hoping you don't have to wait as long as we did . Good luck.’

May 3rd, Sunday fine

[答案] 1

called Ah Fu and along. While parents and

theyworking, my sister walked to werea

was trying to pick a flowershe fell into river. Ah Fu barked and jumped thewhen into water . When my parents heard Ah Fu barking, they ran to the river. They immediately

saw Ah Fu swimming towards the bank carried my little sister. My parents praisedcarrying

Ah Fu warm. It was our brave Ah Fu who had saved my little sister.

Warmly

【解析】

1. 此處是過去分詞作短語作定語，因此，將calling 改為called。

2. 根據(jù)上下文可知，parent應是復數(shù)，所以將parent改為parents。

3. 此處my little sister和Ah Fu and along并列關(guān)系，所以將with改為and。

4. 根據(jù)句意，此處應是過去進行時，所以將they加were。

5. 此處的river首次出現(xiàn)泛指，所以將the改為a。

6. 此句意思是“在他摘花時，意外掉入河中”應用be doing sth when句型，所以將

while改為when。

7. 根據(jù)句意，此處“跳入河中”， 所以將to改為into。

8. 此處應是狀語，應是副詞，所以將immediate改為immediately。

9. 此處是現(xiàn)在分詞作伴隨狀語，所以將carried改為carrying

10. 此處的warm是praised的狀語，所以將warm改為warmly。

[答案]2

A few days before my brother and I went to the cinema by bicycle. My brotherago

, a youngseated/ sitting crossroads

man and a girl came up and stopped us. ‘We've found you long last,’ they said. at But we don't know them. didn’t Pointing

‘He stopped us about half hour ago and made us catch the next offender. So an 去掉to

come on, stand here. you don't have to wait as long as we did . Good luck.’

Hope May 3rd, Sunday fine

【解析】

1、根據(jù)句子時態(tài)和句意此處應是“幾天前”，所以將before改為ago.

2、此次是現(xiàn)在分詞作賓補，表示主動，所以將seating改為seated或sitting。

3、crossroad表示“十字路口’” 時常用Crossroads。

4、根據(jù)文意，“最終找到”at long last是固定搭配。一次在long前加at。

5、前后兩句語義轉(zhuǎn)折，所以將and改為but。

6、根據(jù)上下文此處是一般過去時，所以將don’t改為didn’t。

7、根據(jù)句子結(jié)構(gòu)，此處的Point應是分詞作伴隨狀語，所以將point改為pointing。

8、此處half an hour是固定搭配，所以在half后加an。

9、此處是make sb do sth結(jié)構(gòu)，所以去掉catch前的to。

10、此句是祈使句，應將hoping改為hope。

(1)

Dear Dick,

How nice to hear from you again! You want to know what is going on in schools in china. In short, things have begun to improve since we called on school to reduce learning load. I don’t know about the others, but I used to have to do works even on weekends by doing endless homework and attending classes as well. Now, I have more free time. I can follow my own interests, such as reading books, visiting museums, and taking computer lessons. In the evenings, I can watch news on TV or read newspapers. What’s more, I can go to bed earlier. As far as I know, everyone is happy about the new arrangement of things.

Best wishes! yours,

(2)

Dear Bob,

I’m so glad to learn that you are come in September. I found a place for you. It’s a small flat of 25 square metre, with a bedroom, a bathroom or a kitchen. In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and the chair. The rent is 500 yuans per month. The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street, it is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No. 11 can take you straightly to the school. In fact, it’s only one stop way. Do you think you’d like it? If so , I can try and find another place for you. Just let me know.

Yours ,

[答案]1

Dear Dick,

How nice to hear you again! You want to knowis going on in schools in fromwhat

China. Inshort, things have begun to improve since we on school to reduce去掉a called

learning load. I don’t know about the others,I used to have to do works even onbut

weekends by doing endless homework andclasses as well. Now, I have

attending more free time. I can follow my own interests, such as reading books, visiting museums, and taking computer lessons. In theevenings

What’s more, I can go to bed earlier. As far as I know, everyone is happy about the new early

arrangement of things.

【解析】

1、此處是收到來信，應是hear from。

2、此句是賓語從句，根據(jù)句意應將which改為what。

3、in short是固定搭配，所以去掉冠詞a。

4、根據(jù)上下文可知此處應是一般過去時，所以將call改為called。

5、根據(jù)上下文可知前后兩句應該是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，所以將and改為but。

6、從結(jié)構(gòu)看attend和doing應是并列關(guān)系，所以將attend改為attending。

7、此處根據(jù)上下文，應該用比較級，所以將much改為more。

8、這幾個短語是并列關(guān)系而不是選擇關(guān)系，所以將or改為and。

9、根據(jù)句意，此短語意思是“每天晚上”所以將evening改為eveings。

10、根據(jù)上下文，此句中沒有比較之義，所以將earlier改為early。

[答案]2

Dear Bob,

I’m so glad to learn that you are come in September. I ^found a place for you. It’s cominghave

a small flat of 25 square metre, with a bedroom, a bathroom or a kitchen. In the matres and

bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and the chair. The rent is 500 yuans per month. a yuan

The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street, it is not far from Jianxin Chinese School.which

Bus No. 11 can take you straightly to the school. In fact, it’s only one stop way. Do you Straight away think you’d like it? If so I can try and find another place for you. Just let me know.

not

Yours .

【解析】

1、此句是進行時表將來，所以將come改為coming。

2、此句意思是“我已為你找到一個住處”應該是現(xiàn)在完成時，在learn前加have。

3、多少平方米的英文表達應是“xx square metres。

4、此處應是并列，不是選擇，所以將or改為and。

5、此次故事觀此錯誤，應該用a,和a bed, a sofa, a desk的用法一樣。

6、yuan一詞是中文譯音，不用復數(shù)。

7、it is not far from Jianxin Chinese School是非限制性定語從句，所以改it為which 。

8、straight該詞形容詞副詞同形，去掉straight的ly。

9、It is …away. 意思是“距……多遠”，所以將way改為away。

10、根據(jù)上下文句意，該處應該是if not而不是if so。

(1)

It is well-known that we exist in the dynamic world with various difficulties. When we are faced them, nothing is more important than hope and self-confidence. With confidence, we can find sometime the question is not as “huge”so we imagine.

Take most of our for example, the entrance exam to college seem to be a horrible monster. According, some people give up, some persist. In my eyes, with confidence, right assessment of the difficulties, as good as full preparation, try and exert your strength, but then we will overcome all problems and challenges. On the whole, I believe we youngster should face the difficulties in right manner. And nothing is impossible, brave it out and just do it!

(2)

During the weekend I travelled by air the first time in my life. I generally travel by train and bus. It is both cheaper and safe. But this was a short journey. In the beginning I didn't feel very happily, but this feeling did not last longer. The journey was very exciting. I was soon high up in the sky among the cloud. The views of mountains, fields and rivers were interested. I enjoyed my short and comfortably journey very much. This experience has shown that travelling in air is actually the safest way of make journeys.

[答案]1

It is well-known that we exist indynamic world with various difficulties. When a

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