短文改錯(cuò)新題型

短文改錯(cuò)新題型篇一：短文改錯(cuò)新題型

短文改錯(cuò)新題型專(zhuān)題訓(xùn)練一

1. 下面短文中有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，請(qǐng)?jiān)谟绣e(cuò)誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個(gè)單詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞； 2. 只允許修改10處，多者【從第11處起】不計(jì)分。

1.

The first time I decide to leave home was when I was upon graduation in high school. I was having trouble get along with my parents. I had about fifty dollar in my pockets, and so I thought about leaving home. It took me only two weeks away from home while I started to feel homesick. Living on my own is a total different experience for three main reasons: being more responsible, more decisive and more creative. Because of I’m on my own, I get to deal with my duties without being told. I have to be more careful because my parents are not here to give me their advices.

In the other hand, I could make my own future plan. I have made rules for me to follow. 2.

Rose wanted a job. She went to many offices and she didn’t like any of them. One day she saw a board in an office read: “This office needs a typist whom can type 200 words a minute.” Rose was exciting. When Rose went to the manager’s office, the man was writing something. Rose knocked at the door and the manager raised her head. “Do you need a typist?” asked Rose. “Yes!” he said. Rose clapped her hand. She couldn’t help saying, “OK! How much will you pay for me every month?” The manager thought for a while and said, “I will pay you 77 dollars for first three months. Then I will pay you 30 dollars every month.” Rose smiled and answer, “Great! I will come and work here three months late.” The manager was speechless.

3.

It s a long time since I heard from you in last time．Now I' d like to tell you a impressive story that happened on the first day of my teaching career．

A boy, Li Ming, whom father died a month ago, was late for school．He stood outside the classroom silent．I smiled to him and let him come．

After a while, he began to cry．Seeing this, I walked to him and asked what has happened．He told me his mother was ill but he had to get some medicine for her．At the

same time, he apologized to me for his lateness．Moved by his word, I praised him for his deeds and decided to sing a song was named "Mother" for the students．From then on, I began to realize we should respect our parents and did our best to help them．Do you think so? I'm looking forward to your reply．

4.

I went hiking to a mountain with my friends last summer. It was good trip at te beginning and something unexpected happened half way. One of my friend suddenly felt a terrible pain in his stomach and be couldn’t move any far. Nobody knew what to do it. One girl tried to call her mum in her mobile pone, but there was no signal in the mountain area. Lucky we had brought a tent with us. We put it up and let him rested in it. He took some medicine. Then he drink some water, and ate some food. After while, he felt much better and we walked on. We all enjoyed us on the top of the mountain.

5.

The winter holiday is coming, which made me excited. I have been looking forward at relaxing myself. I’d like to go skating, climb mountains and see several movie. I think I can play the basketball with my classmates. How a wonderful time I’ll have during the winter holiday! However, my parents think different. They don’t want me go out. They are afraid I’ll be knocked down by a truck, fallen off a tree, or fight with others. Besides, they are afraid I will lose my way. I hate being treated like a bird keeping in a cage. To get more freedom, so I will try to persuade them.

6.

In Saturday afternoon, Li Hua and Wang Ping, members from “Green Eyes”, was having an environmental protection activity near the riverside when they catch sight of a bird on the ground. They picked it out and found it wounded. Thinking it should die without timely help, they took it home. Under their treatment and care, the lucky bird got recovered soon. When time came for them to fly the bird, they felt a bit of pity but very delighted. I think it’s worthwhile for him to do such a thing. Here I call on the public to show respects for the nature. Only by changing the way which we treat the environment can we get along well with it.

7.

Our English teacher is a middle-aged woman，who had been teaching English for more than 20 years．She is always working hard．For a model teacher for many years， she is kind and friendly to us and very strict with us. In class，she always encourages us speak and read English as much as possible． She is quite good at teaching and try to make her lessons live and interesting．In her spare She In time，she often teaches us English song and helps us to put on English short plays．She loves us so much as she is always ready to help us．In the fact，she is not only our good teacher but also our good friend．We all respect and love him． 8

The day is my Dad’s birthday. This afternoon I went to the shopping center

downtown, and bought present for him. Then I took the subway train to home.

Sitting on the train, I thought my dad will be very happy when she saw the

present. At the next station, an old lady with two heavy bag got into the train

and stood in front of me. She looked tiring. I hesitated for a moment, and then

offered my seat to her. The old lady thanked me a lot and sat down. Seen her smile, I felt happily. I will always ready to help others in the future.

9．

I just come back from Britain last week. I was luckily enough to be one of the student from different countries to visit the UK from Feb.16 to 28. We paid a visit to many places, like London, Oxford or the Lake District. I learned much about British culture and history in London,where was my favorite. I also liked Oxford, in which I saw much more old buildings. The Lake District was beautiful, but it was pity that it rained heavily when they were there. The most excited thing for me in the Britain was that I made a lot of friends there.

10.

One day Tom and I were walking down the street while we saw an old man fall off his bike. He was badly hurt. Many people crowded around us. Someone suggested carrying the old man to the roadside, so Tom disagreed. He has learned first aid. He said that they ought to leave him where he was and checked him first. At that time the old man wasn't breathing.

Tom asked me to call in the First Aid Center at once and he began to start the old man's breathing, use the mouth-to-mouth way. Within five minutes, the old man began to move little and doctors also arrived. They said that we had done was correct. I have learned from this experience that a knowledge of first aid can make a really difference.

11.

Like many teenagers in China, most of my spare time was spent doing my homework. As a result, I don’t have enough times to do that I’m interested in even on weekends or on holiday. The first thing which I enjoy when I have a few spare minute is to listen to music. It’s the best way for me to escape the stress of their study. When I listen to music, it is like go to another world. Sometimes, the words of the songs seem to express exact how I’m feeling. Besides, I’m also interested in a fashion and I’m always searching something special that can reflect my personality.

12.

The water we drink and use was running short. We all have to learn what to stop wasting water. One of the step that we should take is to find ways of reusing it. Today in the most large cities, fresh water is used only once and then it runs in waste system. But that is possible to pipe the used water to a purifying factory, there the used water can be treated with chemical materials by the workers so that it can reused. But even if every large city purified and reused it’s water, we still would have enough water.

13. One day, I went to the railway station to buy a ticket to my aunt. When I got there, I told that the

ticket had all been sold out. Just then a man came up and said with a strongly Zhejiang accent that he had a spare ticket. I didn’t know that if I could believe him or not. After hesitate for a while,

I decided to take it. So as soon as the man left, I began to regret. If he was not honest, what shall I do? On a third day, I went to the station to see my aunt away. As I was waving goodbye to

her, I saw the man sitting next to my aunt, smiling at me.

14.

In recent years, the volunteering spirit has spread among the Chinese people, especially among youngsters. More and more school in China require students to take part community service during the vocations. Students are often seeing to sweep the streets, plant trees and visit orphanages. Community service is of the great benefit to both those in need and society. Moreover, community service is helpful to cultivate our socially responsibility. As modern middle school students, we should get active involved in community service. By participating, we can learn what to work well in a team, how to improve our interpersonal skill and organizing ability. Undoubtedly, both of these are important to our development. Therefore, they should treasure all such chances.

短文改錯(cuò)答案

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2 but2 who5 hands 7 去掉for ∧first three9later

31 去in 2 a---an3 whom---whose 4 silent---silently5 come---in或加in

6 has---had7 but---and8 word---words9 去was或加which/that 10 did---do 4 1 and---but2 friend---friends 3 far---farther/further 4 去it5 in---on

6 Lucky---Luckily 7 rested---rest 8 drink---drank9 while前加a10 us---ourselves

5 1 made---makes 2 at---to3 movie---movies4去 the 5 How ---What

6 different.---differently7 go前加to8 fallen---fall9 keeping---kept 6 46去掉of

7去掉the 9 respects--- respect去掉7 4 speak前+to

短文改錯(cuò)新題型篇二：短文改錯(cuò)新題型6篇

短文改錯(cuò)新題型6篇

（1）

Last Sunday I saw a worst storm in years. It came sudden and went on for over three hours. After lunch, I went into my room to have a rest. The air was hotter, and all is quiet. Then a strong wind started to blow into my room. Pieces of paper on my desk flew high into the air and some flew out the open window. As I ran out to catch them, big drop of rain began to fall. When I came back into house, it was raining harder and harder. I tried very hard to close the window. Then I heard a loudly crashing(碰撞的)sound from the back of the house. When I ran out to find that a big tree had fallen down and broke the top of the back room.

(2)

I have been planning to join in our college basketball team next year, so now I am spending as more time as I can with other people who likes to play. They are teaching me the most important rules and technologies of the game, and I am getting the better all the time. We have a neighborhood team that play against other teams in the area.。 One of my neighbors is helping rest of us improved our skills. Tonight we are playing against one of the best teams in the city, and I think we can win them if we won't make any mistakes.

(3)

Fang Tong is 34 years old, an actor, director and teacher of Beijing Opera Theatre. Most of her students are from other part of China and have come to Beijing at a very young age of sixteen or seventeen. He hopes create an environment for his students that it is much more relaxing than the one he used to study in. He thought that an actor should relax himself when performing. Yet his students deep respect him and he never needs to raise his voice in order to be hearing. For his opinion, actors should go on even when they feel they have made a mistake in their performances because the moment is already gone but people can never be back to it. So art is always changing and developing.

(4)

Today is Sunday, I have been studying all day long. On the morning, I had a dry breakfast. We have no water to drink because the water supply had cut off. The water come back in the evening. I did math then. I didn't stop after 12 o'clock. After a short lunch I had the break. Then I went to my Sunday English Class. After a long and tired class for more than two hours, I got to

home. Some work had been done but some hadn't. I must review all my subject such as the Sciences, the Humanities, which include Chinese, English, Politics and History as well. That's terribly! Especially when there was no water.

(5)

I have recent been told that listening to loud music is gradual harming people’s hearing. I'm sure it has already been happened to my neighbor. For years she has turned a deaf ear to my requests to turn her radio down. When she gave a party ,she isn't have to invite the rest of the street. Everyone can dance in her music in his own room. Now a scientist has discovered a certain electronic sounds have strange effects on rats. He declares they break down, almost paralyze(癱) with legs trembled. Then it is simply a matter of throwing them out by their tail. I wonder if the same thing will happen to my neighbor one day.

(6)

Dear Ralph,

I'm a senior student. I have be in love with a boy for three years. But he is a shy boy, so I wrote him a letter firstly to express my feeling. And he wrote back. In his letter he said, "We are students. Our task is study. Let us wait to see until we have any chance after graduation." So after graduation I telephoned to him, asking him about go out . But he said he didn't want to. He just wanted to sleep and watched TV. How do you think I should do? Do you think I should continue to love him and give up Sheila?

短文改錯(cuò)新題型6篇

（1）

Last Sunday I saw a worst storm in years. It came sudden and went on for over three hours. After lunch, I went into my room to have a rest. The air was hotter, and all is quiet. Then a strong wind started to blow into my room. Pieces of paper on my desk flew high into the air and some flew out the open window. As I ran out to catch them, big drop of rain began to fall. When I came

back into house, it was raining harder and harder. I tried very hard to close the window. Then I heard a loudly crashing(碰撞的)sound from the back of the house. When I ran out to find that a big tree had fallen down and broke the top of the back room.

1.a-the 2. sudden--suddenly 3 hotter---hot 4 is--was5. out--out of 6. drop—drops 7. house前加the

8. loudly---loud 9. 去掉when 10. broke—broken

(2)

I have been planning to join in our college basketball team next year, so now I am spending as more time as I can with other people who likes to play. They are teaching me the most important rules and technologies of the game, and I am getting the better all the time. We have a neighborhood team that play against other teams in the area.。 One of my neighbors is helping rest of us improved our skills. Tonight we are playing against one of the best teams in the city, and I think we can win them if we won't make any mistakes.

(3)

Fang Tong is 34 years old, an actor, director and teacher of Beijing Opera Theatre. Most of her students are from other part of China and have come to Beijing at a very young age of sixteen or seventeen. He hopes create an environment for his students that it is much more relaxing than the one he used to study in. He thought that an actor should relax himself when performing. Yet his students deep respect him and he never needs to raise his voice in order to be hearing. For his opinion, actors should go on even when they feel they have made a mistake in their performances because the moment is already gone but people can never be back to it. So art is always changing and developing.

(4)

Today is Sunday, I have been studying all day long. On the morning, I had a dry breakfast. We have no water to drink because the water supply had cut off. The water come back in the evening. I did math then. I didn't stop after 12 o'clock. After a short lunch I had the break. Then I went to my Sunday English Class. After a long and tired class for more than two hours, I got to home. Some work had been done but some hadn't. I must review all my subject such as the Sciences, the Humanities, which include Chinese, English, Politics and History as well. That's terribly! Especially when there was no water.

(5)

I have recent been told that listening to loud music is gradual harming people’s hearing. I'm sure it has already been happened to my neighbor. For years she has turned a deaf ear to my requests to turn her radio down. When she gave a party ,she isn't have to invite the rest of the street. Everyone can dance in her music in his own room. Now a scientist has discovered a certain electronic sounds have strange effects on rats. He declares they break down, almost paralyze(癱) with legs trembled. Then it is simply a matter of throwing them out by their tail. I wonder if the same thing will happen to my neighbor one day.

(6)

Dear Ralph,

I'm a senior student. I have be in love with a boy for three years. But he is a shy boy, so I wrote him a letter firstly to express my feeling. And he wrote back. In his letter he said, "We are students. Our task is study. Let us wait to see until we have any chance after graduation." So after graduation I telephoned to him, asking him about go out . But he said he didn't want to. He just wanted to sleep and watched TV. How do you think I should do? Do you think I should continue to love him and give up Sheila?

6

1. be--been 2. firstly--first 3. feeling—feelings4. study前加to 5. until-- if / whether 6. 去掉to 7. go--going8. watched--watch9What10. and—or

Keys

1

1.a-the 2. sudden--suddenly 3 hotter---hot 4 is--was5. out--out of 6. drop—drops 7. house前加the

8. loudly---loud 9. 去掉when 10. broke—broken

2

1. 去掉in 2. more → much 3. likes → like4. technologies → techniques5. 去掉the 6. play → plays

7. rest前加the8. improved → improve9. win-beat 10. won't → don't

3

1.her-his 2. part- parts 3. a-the 4. hope∧to5 去掉 it 6. thought-thinks7. deep-deeply8. hearing-heard 9. For-In 10. but-and

4

1. On→In2. have→had 3. 在cut前加上been 4.been5. after→until 6. the→a 7. tired→tiring8. 去掉to 9. subject→subjects 10. terribly→ terrible

5

1.recently 2.is 3. 去掉been 4. gave---gives5. isn't---doesn't6. in---to7. 去掉a8. with后加their9. trembled---trembling10. tail---tails

6

1. be--been 2. firstly--first 3. feeling—feelings4. study前加to 5. until-- if / whether 6. 去掉to 7. go--going8. watched--watch9What10. and—or

短文改錯(cuò)新題型篇三：2016廣東改革新題型：短文改錯(cuò)技巧以及練習(xí)

短文改錯(cuò)新題型策略與技巧

歸納短文改錯(cuò)錯(cuò)誤類(lèi)型:

(一) 詞法的測(cè)試

1.名詞：主要是查名詞是否可數(shù)，與其修飾語(yǔ)是否一致。

1) I have many hobby, such as football, sing, listen music.

2) Do exercises do good to our healthy.

3) Reading books is one of my hobby.

2. 代詞：對(duì)于短文中出現(xiàn)的每一個(gè)代詞都要查一下它所指代的內(nèi)容及在句中的作用，注意其數(shù)、格、詞性是否正確和前后是否一致，�？嫉拇�詞包括人稱代詞、指示代詞、反身代詞、關(guān)系代詞及疑問(wèn)代詞等。

1).He drove too fast, and the police stopped her.

前面提到的是he而后面卻用her來(lái)代，故應(yīng)將her改為him.

2).This is the best film which I have ever seen.

先行詞前有最高級(jí)修飾應(yīng)用關(guān)系代詞that 而不是which。

3. 冠詞：英語(yǔ)中只有三個(gè)冠詞。

1) I meant to write letter and tell you all the things…

letter為可數(shù)名詞,故write后應(yīng)加a.

2) I like playing the football. 去the

3) He is a honest boy. a改為an

4. 介詞：

1) I am writing to thank you with your kind help.

thank sb. for sth.為固定搭配，故應(yīng)將with 改為for.

2) …I’m the happiest in all.此句想表達(dá)的意思是―我是所有人中最高興的‖。故應(yīng)將in改為 of.

3) Under the help of my father, I …under 改為 with

4) He went to Beijing in next Sunday.in 改為on

5. 形容詞、副詞：形容詞、副詞的誤用主要指在該用形容詞的地方用了副詞，該用副詞的地方用了形容詞。改錯(cuò)行中出現(xiàn)形容詞或副詞時(shí)就要仔細(xì)分析該形容詞或副詞修飾什么，形式是否正確，是原級(jí)、比較級(jí)還是最高級(jí)。形容詞、副詞誤用也是�？嫉母腻e(cuò)項(xiàng)目之一。

1) I had not interest in English .interest

是名詞，應(yīng)用形容詞no來(lái)修飾，而not是副詞，副詞不能修飾名

2) These are the happier girls I’ve ever seen.(NMET2007)

此處有I’ve ever seen限定，應(yīng)用最高級(jí)，故happier應(yīng)改為 happiest.

3) You can borrow a book very easy.easy 改為easily.

4) These books are very worth reading.用well 修飾

6. 連詞：短文改錯(cuò)中出現(xiàn)連詞就要判斷連詞用的是否正確，是否符合句子意思；連接的是詞還是句子，是否符合邏輯關(guān)系。此外如果是平行結(jié)構(gòu)就要注意前后時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)、詞性一致問(wèn)題平行結(jié)構(gòu)常借助與并列連詞and , or , but , not only…but also…, …not…but…, either…or…, neither …nor…, as well as等。

1) As it has been raining these days, so we have decided to put off our sports meeting. 由于前句有As引導(dǎo)原因狀語(yǔ)從句，因此后句不能再用so,故應(yīng)把so 去掉。

2) The population is growing, but the earth must support too many people.

根據(jù)上下文意思判斷，前后兩個(gè)并列分句不存在意義上的折，所以but應(yīng)改為and或so.這是典型的并列連詞誤用。

7. 動(dòng)詞：動(dòng)詞錯(cuò)誤在短文改錯(cuò)中所占比重最大，它所涉及的錯(cuò)誤包括動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤；易混動(dòng)詞的用法錯(cuò)誤; 動(dòng)詞的第三人稱單數(shù)錯(cuò)誤；動(dòng)詞的非謂語(yǔ)形式，以及動(dòng)詞的句型搭配錯(cuò)誤等。在改錯(cuò)題中，動(dòng)詞方面的考查比例較大。

1) 動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)

a. I will write again and send you the photos we take together.

take photos動(dòng)作發(fā)生在過(guò)去，應(yīng)用過(guò)去時(shí).

b. The book you borrowed from the library should returned in five days.

根據(jù)本句意義，should后應(yīng)加上been，構(gòu)成被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)。

c. In school, I often playing football for my friends. playing改為 play; for 改為with

2) 易混動(dòng)詞使用錯(cuò)誤

a. I persuaded him to stop smoking, but he didn’t listen.

persuade 意為―說(shuō)服‖，強(qiáng)調(diào)成功的結(jié)果，而根據(jù)下句 he didn’t listen可知，勸說(shuō)并沒(méi)有成功，故應(yīng)改persuaded為 advised.

b. You please rise your hands.

rise是不及物動(dòng)詞，而raise是及物動(dòng)詞，所以舉手應(yīng)用 raise your hands.這屬于及物動(dòng)詞與不及物動(dòng)詞的誤用。

3) 非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞使用錯(cuò)誤

a. We are looking forward to see you on the birthday party.

look forward to 中的to是介詞，應(yīng)加動(dòng)名詞，將see改為seeing.

b. I’m sorry I keep you wait for a long time .I got caught in the t(轉(zhuǎn) 載于:www.zuancaijixie.com 蒲公 英文摘:短文改錯(cuò)新題型)raffic.

keep均和doing連用，如keep doing sth.; keep sb. (sth).doing sth. ;keep …from doing… 等.

c. I’d like to your pen friend, and get to know more about your country.

to后加be。因其后是名詞，而不是動(dòng)詞原形，不能直接用to.

8. 詞語(yǔ)固定搭配:

主要考查介詞與動(dòng)詞、名詞、形容詞的固定搭配；副詞、動(dòng)詞的固定搭配；及物動(dòng)詞后多介詞或副詞以及不及物動(dòng)詞后少介詞，英語(yǔ)中的一些固定句型與習(xí)慣搭配等。

1) My teacher advised me to keep my diary.keep a diary是固定搭配，意思是―寫(xiě)日記‖.

2) In my surprise, he did very well in his previous job. To one’s surprise 是固定搭配

3) I thought that was dull to watch a game…此題考查it的功能，It + be + adj. + to do為固定結(jié)構(gòu)。

4) …the activities are not only enjoyable and also helpful. 解析： not only… but also…為固定結(jié)構(gòu)，故將and 改為but.

5) I have no difficulty learn maths.have difficulty (in) doing sth.為固定結(jié)構(gòu)

6) He spends too much time play games. spend some time (in) doing sth.為固定結(jié)構(gòu) 做題步驟：1.通讀全文，獲取大意。2，逐句修改。3. 帶入答案復(fù)查。

一（2014同桌系的以下作文。10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（ ）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線（ ），并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及修改均僅限一詞；2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

（一 遼寧卷）

Dear Jeremy and Alice,

Although we’ve been delighted to have you as neighbors, we’re hoping to settle something that bothers to us. In a word, your dog—Cleo.

We’ve called several time about Cleo’s early morning barking. It is difficult to understanding why she barks every minute she’s outside. The early morning barking have been disturbing us as wc arc often up all night with the baby. Beside, Cleo tends to bark a average of six hours a day. This morning she starts barking even before 5 o’clock. That is too much for us. considering how closely the houses are.

We appreciate our apologies and goodwill, but we hope that you can figure a good way of settling the matter.

二（2014陜西卷）

My father took me out camping for the first time when I was seven. He wanted teach me about animals, insects and trees. My uncles all come along with bows and arrows for hunting.

One evening at sunset, we sat by the fire, have our barbecue. Just then a bird was flying over us. My uncles immediate jumped up and shot their arrows on the bird. Neither of the arrows hit the target. Suddenly the arrows was flying down at us from the sky — they were looked like rain! We ran to escape but fortunately no one was injured.

That day I didn’t learn much about animals, insects or trees, but I learnt a impressive lesson about gravity!

三（2014四川卷）

Hello, boys and girls! Today, I am going to talk with what you should do when a fire alarm go off. If you hear the alarm, stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside. Stay close to your teacher and classmate. Don't panic or get out of line, and trying to remain quiet and calmly. Soon the firefighters will come and put out a fire. If it's a false alarm and there is no fire, your teacher will lead us back to the classroom. If you notice that when someone is missing and hurt, tell your teacher immediately.

四（2014新課標(biāo)I）

Nearly five years before ,and with the help by our father, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes（圣女果）in our back garden, since then---for all these year---we had been allowing tomatoes to self seed where they please . As result, the plants are growing somewhere. The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste. There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors .Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problem. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at on cost!

五（2014浙江卷 ）

I was taking a train to London’s Victoria Station. I had noticed that the carriage was noise and filled with people.

Before long, a train inspector comes to check out tickets. A passenger realized he couldn’t find his ticket but became quite upset. Then everyone in the carriage began searching the ticket, which was eventually found under a seat several rows from his owner. The person who found a ticket smiled with pleasure at his success.

No one in the carriage had previous spoken to or even noticed the ticket-owner before. Yet, they had so quickly offered the strangers their help. If we could show concern

to others on need, the world would be a better place to live in.

六

Learning English is great importance. English is widely used all over the world. It was often used in the international meetings. Most business letters are written in English. With a help of English we can learn modern science and technology from the developed countries. We can also introduce our achievement and experiences to other countries. Because of their importance, English is a requiring subject in high schools and colleges. Now many people are working hardly at English. It’s very important to learn English well. If we learn English well, we can serve for our country better. So I suggest most Chinese can learn it well.

七

Locate in Conghua, the Temple, which covers and area of 900 square meters, are said to be built between 1426 and 1435. After it was first built, much big repairs, were done in different dynasties, seven of them were recorded in words. This is first discovery of ancient buildings in our province with exact times. To let it survive, local villagers and government treasures the grand relic and protect it with great care and repair it when is necessary. Because of their great efforts, in 2003, when the Temple was given first prize as cultural relic protection from the UN.

八

I eager to go to college because I know there is so many to learn about the world and about human beings. Knowledge is source of pleasure for me. I want to study at a college for the fun to knowledge; I know college education can prepares me better for my future. Better education mean, more often then not, better jobs, better opportunities and better choices. I want to go to college because I know that our parents and other people care for me will be happy with that. Unless I can study at a nice university, I will make them happy. I’d like not let them down. That’s why I must go to college.

九

Grain, which is used to be the main food of most people in China, is now playing a more important role. On the other hand, meat and fish has increased rapidly. The changes in diet can be accounted by three main reason. First, people are much wealthier than before. By higher income, they can afford to buy good foods. Secondly, people have realized the importance of balanced diet to their health. Lack in certain amount of meat, for example, will result in poor health. Finally, because of the economic reform, meat, chicken, fish or milk, which were scarce in the past, were produced in large quantities now. we believe that as far as the effort continues in reform and development, there will be greater changes in people’s diet in the future.

十

My mother is a village woman, who is already in fifties. She had very little education, and she knows knowledge is of very importance to young people. She often asks me how I get along with my studies and encourages me study hard. My mother does everything she can for me so that I can spend more time with my study. Once she was bad ill and had stayed in bed for several days. When I got home, I found the light was still off and mother was sitting in bed, made new clothes for me! I was so deeply moved that tear came to my eyes. So is my mother, a kind and hard-working woman.

一 .1.【答案】wanted后面加to

【試題解析】固定搭配want to do sth想要做某事；to是不能省略的，不定式to do sth作為want的賓語(yǔ)。

2. 【答案】come改為came

【試題解析】根據(jù)本文第一句可知講述的是過(guò)去發(fā)生的事情，所以使用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，所以使用came。

3. 【答案】have改為having

【試題解析】本句中動(dòng)詞have與句子主語(yǔ)we構(gòu)成邏輯上的主動(dòng)關(guān)系，所以使用現(xiàn)在分詞在句中做狀語(yǔ)。

4. 【答案】immediate改為immediately

【試題解析】本句中應(yīng)該使用副詞immeately來(lái)修飾謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞jumped，在句中做狀語(yǔ)。形容詞immediate不能做狀語(yǔ)。

5. 【答案】on改為at

【試題解析】固定搭配shoot..at…不能使用介詞on。At表示瞄準(zhǔn)的對(duì)方或者方向。

6. 【答案】Neither改為none

【試題解析】代詞neither表示兩者都不…；而本句中沒(méi)有提及兩者，應(yīng)該是有很多的鳥(niǎo)。故使用none表示三者或者三者以上的全部否定。

7. 【答案】was改為were

【試題解析】本句的主語(yǔ)是復(fù)數(shù)名詞arrows，所以謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞使用復(fù)數(shù)形式were。 8 【答案】去掉were或者looked

【試題解析】本句是指箭如雨下，要么使用look like看起來(lái)像..；要么使用be like…像…一樣。

9. 【答案】but改為and

【試題解析】我們四處逃跑，很幸運(yùn)的是沒(méi)有人受傷。根據(jù)上下文語(yǔ)境可知表示并列關(guān)系。

10. 【答案】a改為an

【試題解析】后面的形容詞impressive是以元音開(kāi)始的，所以使用an。

二 去掉had 本文敘述的是過(guò)去發(fā)生的一件事情，不需要使用過(guò)去完成時(shí)，因?yàn)檫^(guò)去完成時(shí)表示的是過(guò)去的過(guò)去的事情。句意：我注意到車(chē)廂里很吵鬧都是人。

2.noise改為noisy 本句中應(yīng)該使用形容詞noisy和系動(dòng)詞was構(gòu)成系表結(jié)構(gòu)，修飾車(chē)?yán)锂?dāng)時(shí)的情況。同時(shí)noisy與后面的形容詞短語(yǔ)filled with…構(gòu)成并列關(guān)系。

3.comes改為came 因?yàn)楸疚闹v述的是過(guò)去發(fā)生的事情，所以使用一般過(guò)去時(shí)的時(shí)態(tài)。列車(chē)員過(guò)來(lái)檢票。

4.but改為and 句意：一位乘客找不到自己的票，很難受。上下文之間是順接關(guān)系，所以使用and。But表示上下文之間的轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系。

5.searching后面加for 根據(jù)句意可知每個(gè)人都幫助他找票。固定搭配search for sth尋找sth；

6.his改為its/the 句意：這張票最終是在它的主人幾排后面的座位下面被找到的。Its指代the ticket。

7.a改為the 使用定冠詞the特指上文提及的同一事物，本文中特指前面提及的那張票。

8.previoes改為previously 本句中應(yīng)該使用副詞previously作狀語(yǔ)，修飾謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞。

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