短文改錯myparentsand
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短文改錯myparentsand篇一：高中英語短文改錯,附答案
I have a good friend who’s name is Liu Mei. She is our monitor and one of the excellent student in our class. Although she is clever, but she works very hard. We have a lot on common and have a lot to talk about. One evening she told me that something happened when her parents was out. She was doing her homeworks one Sunday morning when she smelt something burning. She stopped look out of the window and find a cloud of smoke coming out of her neighbour’s house. She called 119 immediate. Ten minutes later, the firemen came and put out fire. Her neighbour was very thankful for her help.
改錯二
I went to see the film after supper. On my way the cinema, I met an English woman, who lost her way. I gave up the chance see the film and took her to her hotel. While go there, I told her about great changes that had been taken place in the past few years and she had told me anything about her country. Although I missed the film, I still felt very happy, for I had not only helped her out of trouble but practise my spoken English. If I had not worked hard on English, I would have been able to help him.
改錯三
Dear Ralph,
I'm a senior student. I'm getting well with a boy in my class. But I have fallen in love with him for almost half a year. He is shy boy, so I wrote him a letter first to express my feeling. He wrote back. In his letter he said, "We are students. Our task is study hard. Let us to wait and see whether we have some chance after graduation." So after graduation I telephoned to him, ask him about going out. But he said he didn't want to. He just wanted to sleep and watched TV. What do you think I should do? Do you think I should continue to love him and give up?
改錯四
Dear Bob,
Hello. I learn about you from my English teacher, Miss Fang. I’d like to your penfriend, and get to know more about your country.
First, let me tell you something more about myself. My name is Li Hua. I live in Beijing, where is the capital of China. I go to Hongqi Middle School. We study quite a few
Yours,Li Hua
Two months ago, I went to abroad for further study. Before I left, I was given a lot present. Among them， there were two presents which were really interested me. My sister buys me a book with color pictures about body language and with words about customs of different country in them. My brother gave me a note which read, “My present has put in your bedroom.” When I hurried into my bedroom, I found a box, in that there was an electronic dictionary. I was very glad but a few surprised to receive these two presents.
改錯六
Dear Li Ming,
I have received your letter yesterday. Don’t worry about you. I’m getting along well with my research works in the lab. But, to my surprising, you say you will give up learn English. The reason is that you have not done well in it recently and you have lost interesting. I’m afraid I can’t agree with you. I know it is not easy to learn English, and English is widely used in the world today and it will be important tool in your future work. Besides, it is becoming more and more important at our daily life. If you study hard, you will succeed. Do remember where is a will, there is a way.
改錯七
Some students don’t like talking about their parents often as if their parents love them very much. Are you going on well with your parents? You and your parents will be very happy if you can be friend. Here are some way to have a good talk with them. Find a good time to talk, like when you’re eating dinner, going out for walk and watching TV. Tell them something you’re interested in, or ask them about their life when they are young. They love to talk about our past! Meet them face to face and listen to them carefully. Be honesty, and your parents will trust you more.
改錯八
One afternoon Jack is walking down a river along. It was very cold day and on the river few boats could be seen．When he stopped on a bridge and look down, he saw a terrible scene. A boy fell of a canoe(獨木舟) and was struggling in the water．Without think about herself, Jack jumped into the river and to save the boy． He was about to drag（拖） the boy to the river bank then he saw some people stand in a motor boat under the bridge． One of them stared Jack and said angrily, “They are making a film and you’ve spoiled a whole afternoon’s work!”
答案：
改錯一：who's 改為whose 2.正確 3.去掉but 4.on改為in 5.parents后加were 6.homeworks改為homework 7.stopped后加to 8.find改為found 9.immediate改為immediately 10.fire前加the
改錯二： the改為a 2.正確 3.see前加to 4.go改為going 5.去掉been 6.
去掉had 7.去掉but
8.去掉had 9.on改為at 10.him改為her
改錯三：1.getting 后加on或along 2.fallen改為been 3.shy前加a 4.feeling改為feelings 當(dāng)情感講時feeling常用單數(shù) 5.study前加to或study改為studying 6.去掉to 7.去掉to 8.watched改為watch 9正確 10.and改為or
改錯四：1. learn 改為 learnt或learned。2. to 后加 be 或 become。3. 刪去more。第一次告訴 Bob 關(guān)于自己的一些事情， 此處用 more 不合邏輯。4. where 改為 which。在此非限定性定語從句中， 關(guān)系詞在從句中作主語， 故用 which。5. 此行無錯。6. subject 改為 subjects。quits a few 意為“相當(dāng)多”， 修飾可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)。7. use 改為 used。據(jù)下文 but now 可知， 此處應(yīng)用used to do 表示“過去常常 做某事”。8. interesting 改為 interested。be interested in?為固定短語， “對??感興趣”。9. What 后加 is。此句無謂語。10. hear 改為 hearing。look forward to doing sth.為固定短語。
改錯五：答案：
76．去掉to 短語錯誤。go abroad“出國”。
77．present→presents 名詞的數(shù)錯誤。present“禮物”，是可數(shù)名詞。
78．去掉第二個were 動詞錯誤。interest在此是及物動詞用法，意為“使??感興趣”。be interested in“對??感興趣”。
79．buys→bought 時態(tài)錯誤。由全文可知，用一般過去時態(tài)。
80．√
81．them→it 代詞錯誤。在這本書里有關(guān)于肢體語言的圖片和不同國家的語言習(xí)俗。用it指代這本書。
82．put前加been 語態(tài)錯誤。我的禮物被放在了你的臥室里了。禮物是被放在臥室里，所以用被動語態(tài)。
83．that→which 定語從句關(guān)系詞錯誤。介詞后用which，不用that。
84．but→and 連接邏輯錯誤。前后是并列關(guān)系而非轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系。
85．few→little 混淆錯誤。a little 與 little 可以用作副詞， 表示“有點”“稍稍” ，修飾動詞、副詞、形容詞或介詞短語。如：He is a little tired.他有點累了。而a few不可用作副詞。
改錯五 1.have去掉2.about后的you改為me 3.works→work 4.learn→learning
5.recent→recently 6.interesting→interest 7.English后的and改為but 8.be后加an
9.at→in 10.where后加there
改錯六41. about→with/to 根據(jù)句意，可知此處是表達(dá)“和父母交談”，而不是“談?wù)摳改浮薄?/p>
42. as→even if 意為“好像”，與句意不符；根據(jù)句意，此處應(yīng)是表達(dá)讓步關(guān)系。故用even if ,意為“即使”。
43. going→getting get along well with 是固定短語，意為“和…相片融洽”。
44. √
45. way→ways some在此處修飾可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)。
46. walk前加a go out for a walk意為“出去散步”
47. and→or 此處表選擇關(guān)系。
48. are→were “他們年輕時候”應(yīng)用動詞的過去式。
49. our→their 和they保持一致。
50. honesty→honest 形容詞honest 作表語。
短文改錯myparentsand篇二：2011---2013高考英語真題短文改錯及答案
高考短文改錯 1
2011年普通高等學(xué)校招生全國統(tǒng)一考試(浙江卷)
I was playing at my cousin house. Since his family was rich than mine, he had more toys than I did. There was one on particular I’d always wanted. I put into my pocket when he wasn’t looking. I guessed, even at that age, I would never be able to enjoy to playing with the toy or faced my cousin again; I would always know I’d done something wrong. Late on, my aunt drove me home. When she dropped me off, I pulled out the toy slow and gave it back. She knows what had happened, but she thanked me and ever mentioned it again.
第一節(jié)（10分，每小題1分）
1.cousin – cousin’s 2. rich – richer3.on --- in4.put ---put it/that 5. enjoy to --- enjoy
6.faced --- face 7. Late --- Later8.slow --- slowly 9. knows --- knew 10. ever --- never
高考短文改錯 2
2011年普通高等學(xué)校招生全國統(tǒng)一考試(遼寧卷)
In early January this year, the rate of UFO reports was steady ,around three per
week. When, however, on Monday, January 16, a science fiction film about visitors from outer space was shown on television ,there was the immediate increase in reports of sightings from all parts of the States. The commanding officer ,Wayne Tyler ,who directly responsible for the study all such reports ,decided to making his findings known. They wrote an article ,which said that all UFO reports could be explained for quite naturally by aircraft movements. Follow this explanation ,there was a rapid drop in the number of reported sightings ,because the rate remainded above the previous level.
注：文章紅色部分為需要修改的地方！
第1個考查 主謂一致，were—was;
第2個考查 名詞單復(fù)數(shù) weeks--week
第3個考查 介詞從外面來，介詞應(yīng)該用from.
第4個考查冠詞 the--a
第5個考查非限制性定語從句 注意be responsible for 表示對什么負(fù)責(zé)。who后加 was或is 第6個考查非謂語 decide to do sth. making—make
第7個考查代詞 指代前面Wayne Tyler，因此用They--He。
第8個考查動詞explain是及物動詞，不需要介詞。去掉for
第9個考查非謂語做狀語用follow---following.
第10個考查連詞 because 表示原因，根據(jù)上文應(yīng)該是表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系的連詞。
because---although/though/but/yet
高考短文改錯3
2011年普通高等學(xué)校招生全國統(tǒng)一考試(陜西卷)
Last Sunday morning，when l was having a walk in the park near my home，I came
across a crew make a new film with one of my favourite actor．I didn’t have my camera with me at that time，．Unfortunately，by the time I gotback，they have finished the scene and the actor couldn’t be seen everywhere．I was really disappointing and about to leave when he walked out a building．He was right there in the front of me! I couldn’t believe my luck--not only did I had my photo taken with him，
but he signed his name on my shirt!
答案：
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but he signed his name on my shirt!
高考短文改錯 4
2011高考英語試題（新課標(biāo)卷）
My summer travel started terribly .I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy a ticket to Hang Zhou. I was going to visit a friend here and after that I would go to Xiamen for long holiday. I bought my ticket but turned around to pick up my bag from the floor and then I realized that someone had stolen it. Luckily I had all my money on my pocket, but the only clothes I had was those I had on. It felt very strange to travel without any luggages. When I finally arrived at my friend he lent to me lots of clothes. I feel very happy that I could change my clothes at last.
答案：
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高考短文改錯 5
2012年浙江高考英語試題
Two years before, I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car. Unfortunate, I had an accident and
hit another car, and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week. 1 called my parents, so I didnot tell them what had happened. I knew that they will be worried about myself because I
was so farther away, and that my mother would not sleep if she knew. Therefore, I told them
interested stories and how I was enjoying Brazil As a result, nobody knew truth. I still think that
it was the right thing to do.
第一節(jié) 短文改錯
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高考短文改錯 6
2012年普通高等學(xué)校招生全國統(tǒng)一考試(遼寧卷)
Dear Diana,
Thank you for the lovely day we have with you. It was so kind for you to let us bring Anne’s friend, Gina. Unfortunate, the only problem was the journey home. There had been a terrible accident on through highway and, for a result, there was a long line of traffic for at least six mile. In the end, we drove to the service station and waited there unless the road was clear. In the car park here Gina nearly got knocked over as a car drove out too quickly from behind a lorry. They finally dropped Gina off at her parents’ and made our own way to home.
Much love
Fiona
答案：
Dear Diana,
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高考短文改錯7
2012全國英語高考真題 陜西卷
My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month. It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport .We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath. What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email messages every day. I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing. The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local
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