短文改錯:deareditor

短文改錯:deareditor篇一：高三短文改錯專練

（一）

Dear editor,

I’m sorry to occupy your precious time, and I really want to tell you anything about the problem of some people keeping too many pets nowadays. I take the problem more and more seriously for the following reason. First of all, as it is known to people, pets make so much noise that trouble residents a lot. What’s more, it is widely accepted that animal waste pollutes the environment, where makes people quite uncomfortable. Many owners like taking their pets to public place where they may frighten children or even bite people. The mostly important is that pets can spread some diseases and this has attracted much attention. Take all these factors into consideration, I sincerely hope that I can get help from you and expect the media do something for this.

Yours truly,

Wang Lin

（二）

My classmate, Joseph, is at present in hospital with a breaking leg. He was walking to school the other day when he let a bicycle ran right into him. He never watches where he is going, so he often gets into the trouble. And he is having a nice time there. He has a comfortable room, patiently nurses, and a great deal of time to read. Some friends of him go to see him every day, and they take him lots of good book and fresh fruit. He is not losing any time from school because he is busy studying which he has missed in classes. The doctor says he is recovering fast than expected and will be out of hospital a few weeks.

（三）

One afternoon, when I was on my way home, the weather changed suddenly. Darker clouds were gathering. I began to feel worried so I didn’t have both a raincoat or an umbrella with me. It soon started to rain. Just as I was hurrying up home, I heard someone calling me from behind. I turned to have a look and find that he was Liu Wei, good neighbor of mine. He offered to share her umbrella with me. We walked all the ways home. With Liu Wei’s help, I would have got wet to the skin. How thankfully I was for his help. （四）

I’m quite familiar your situation. As computers become increasingly popular, some student can’t help play online games or chatting. It was not only a problem of wasting time, but a seriously problem which does harm to their health. What you should do first is to find out what make them addicted with computer games. Lack of love from parents? Poor test scores? Then having a heart-to-hearttalk with them. Secondly, you should help them build up their confidence and make them interesting in studies. Thirdly, to find something else for them to do instead of playing computer games. Your efforts will surely make a difference and help change their lives.

（五）

Dear fellow students,

There is a serious phenomenon in our school that many students crowded in the school store to buy snacks and some students even eat snacks in class.

Eating snacks are a bad habit and is also waste of money. In addition to, most snacks are unhealthy food, for they contain too many fat and sugar. Eating snacks improper may lead to fatness and illness. What’s more, some students throw the wrappers everywhere, that pollutes our campus.

Dear fellow students, it’s high time that we pay attention to this phenomenon. Our high school students, should develop good eating habits. Remember that three regular meals a day as well as a balance diet is essential for us.

【答案】 一．【小題1】and→but

【小題2】anything →something

【小題3】reason→ reasons

【小題4】去掉it

【小題5】trouble→troubles/they trouble

【小題6】where→which

【小題7】place→places

【小題8】mostly→most

【小題9】Take→Taking

【小題10】do→to do/will do

【解析】

試題分析：本文是一封信，講述了當今人們養(yǎng)的寵物過多的情況。

【小題1】and→but 考查連詞以及對文章的理解。I’m sorry to occupy your precious time,與 I really want to tell you anything about the problem of some people keeping too many pets nowadays之間是轉折關系，所以用but 。

【小題2】anything →something考查代詞。Anything任何事，something一些事，陳述語氣，所以

用something。

【小題3】reason→ reasons 考查名詞。理由，可數(shù)名詞，故用reasons。

【小題4】去掉it 考查代詞。As is known to...眾所周知，固定句式，故去掉it

【小題5】trouble→troubles/they trouble 考查動詞。Noise不可數(shù)名詞，用第三人稱單數(shù)形式，也可以增加主語，用 troubles/they trouble。

【小題6】where→which 考查關系詞。非限制性定語從句，用which引導，故用which。

【小題7】place→places 考查名詞。地點，可數(shù)名詞，用places。

【小題8】mostly→most 考查形容詞。Most此處是最高級，最重要的是，mostly表示大多數(shù)，所以用most。

【小題9】Take→Taking 考查動詞。與主語之間是主動關系，用Taking。

【小題10】do→to do/will do 考查時態(tài)。Expect sb to do /will do希望某人做某事，用to do/will do。

【難度】一般

【答案】

二．【小題1】breaking- broken

【小題2】ran- run 【小題3】去掉trouble前的the

【小題4】And--But

【小題5】patiently- patient

【小題6】him--his

【小題7】book- books

【小題8】which--what

【小題9】fast--faster

【小題10】hospital后面加in

【解析】

【小題1】breaking- broken 考查形容詞 。過去分詞作定語，意為“斷了的，摔壞了的”

【小題2】ran- run考查動詞的用法 。let sb./sth. do.“讓某人做……”，使役動詞后用動詞原形，作賓語補足語

【小題3】去掉trouble前的the 考查固定搭配。get into trouble意為“陷入困難、麻煩”，為固定搭配，不加定冠詞the

【小題4】And—But 考查連詞。句意：但他玩的高興。表示轉折。

【小題5】patiently- patient 考查形容詞 。句意：他有一個舒適的房間，耐心的護士和大量時間閱讀。

【小題6】him--his考查形容詞 。句意：每天有他的朋友去看他。

【小題7】book- books考查名詞。lots of修飾book要用復數(shù)，表示“許多書”

【小題8】which--what考查定語從句。句意：他沒有失去在學校的時間因為他忙于學習，這是他所丟失的。Which引導定語從句；

【小題9】fast--faster 考查形容詞。由than連接的從句表示“比……更”，前面的形容詞或副詞要用比較級

【小題10】hospital后面加in考查介詞 。句意：醫(yī)生說他比想象的恢復地快在數(shù)周之內就能出院。in a few weeks在數(shù)周之內。

【難度】一般

短文改錯:deareditor篇二：2015全國各地模擬試題之短文改錯

D單元 短文改錯

目錄 D單元 短文改錯 ........................................................................................................................... 1

D1 短文改錯記敘文 ........................................................................................................................ 1

D2 短文改錯應用文 ........................................................................................................................ 4

D3 短文改錯議論文 ........................................................................................................................ 5

D4短文改錯說明文 ......................................................................................................................... 6

D1 短文改錯記敘文

【英語卷（解析）·2015屆遼寧省沈陽二中高三12月月考（201412）】第一節(jié)：短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下便條。便條中共有10處錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加，刪除或修改。 增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（ ），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除；把多余的詞 用斜線（ \ ）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1；每處錯誤及修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

The other day after work, I was walking down the street while I saw a boy riding a nice unicycle, one of those bicycle with only one wheel. Dressing in all pink from head to toe, he was singing a song which was sounded like a kid’s song. I thought he must be total crazy. Just then, a lady dropped 20-dollar bill on the ground, but he didn’t realize it and started to walk away. The guy in pink picked out the money and gave it back to her. After that, he rode on but soon disappeared before the lady could thank him. How a strange and good guy!

【答案】【知識點】D1 短文改錯記敘文

【答案解析】

第一行：while改為when：was/were doing sth when … 是固定搭配；

第二行：bicycle改為bicycles，those后應當用復數(shù)；dressing 改為dressed，dress是及物動詞，與主語是被動關系，故用過去分詞形式；

第三行：去掉sounded前的was，sound是不及物動詞，不能用被動語態(tài)；total改為totally，用副詞修飾形容詞；

第四行：dropped后加a，一張20美元的鈔票；bill是可數(shù)名詞；he改為she，此處應當指代的是a lady；

第五行：out改為up，pick up是固定短語，撿起；but改為and，上下句是并列關系； 第六行：How改為what，固定句型：what a/an adj+可數(shù)名詞單數(shù)=How adj a/an 可數(shù)名詞單數(shù)。

【英語卷（解析）·2015屆河南省安陽一中等天一大聯(lián)考高三階段測試（三）（201412）word

版】第一節(jié)短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文

中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（ ），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（ ）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：

1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改1O處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

Union is strength Whenever you're faced with difficulties or in a dilemma ,cooperation plays an important part in getting you out of trouble

There was a time when I was too proud that I overlooked my classmate ． refusing to work together with them．Therefore ．it was no doubt that I was left alone ． suffering from loneliness and failure． Unfortunately a teacher impressed on me the value of cooperation． From then on ,I learned to help others and turn to my friends for the help whenever I had difficulty finish a task on my own． Surely cooperation made a great difference． Now I am getting well with my friend．

My experience has teach me that only if we attach great importance with cooperation can we go beyond ourselves As the saying go "United we stand ;divided we fall．"

【答案】【知識點】D1 短文改錯記敘文

【答案解析】

第三行：我是如此驕傲，以至于忽略了同學。這里用so…that…句型：too改成so ；classmate是可數(shù)名詞，這里用復數(shù)：改成classmates

第四行：這里考查固定句型： there is no doubt that…毫無疑問；老師讓他知道合作的重要性，這是幸運的事情：故Unfortunately改為fortunately.

第五行：向朋友求助，turn to sb for help。這里是泛指，去掉the。

第六行：這里考查的是固定詞組：have difficulty in doing “做??有困難”，finish改成finishing；get along well with sb，與??相處的好，固定短語，在get后加on或along

第七行：考查時態(tài)：has后面接過去分詞構成現(xiàn)在完成時：teach改為taught；考查詞組：

attach importance to 重視，with改成to；

第八行：考查主謂一致：the saying后面接動詞的第三人稱單數(shù)：go改成goes；

【英語卷（解析）·2015屆山西省山大附中高三12月月考（201412）】第一節(jié) 短文改錯 (共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分)

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加，刪除或修改。 增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（）,并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

Patience is of great importance in our daily life. Once I waited a bus to come at a stop. 30 minutes past, but no bus came. Both upset and annoyed, I decided to walk on feet. But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived. I thought if I had waited for one more minute, I would have caught it. If I chose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for other 30 minutes. Only then do I realize my problem. Being impatient will possible waste all the effort that we have put it in. Now whenever I am close to lose my patience, I’ll think of this experience.

【答案】【知識點】D1 短文改錯記敘文

【文章綜述】文章通過作者的一次等車的經歷，說明耐心是非常重要的

【答案解析】

1.waited后面加for 句意：有一次我在等車來。Wait是不及物動詞，waited后面加for

2.past改成 passed 句意：30分鐘過去了。Past是介詞，這句話缺少謂語動詞： passed

3.feet.改成 foot句意：我決定步行。On foot步行

4.when 改成than 句意：我已離開公共汽車就到了。使用no sooner?. Than?，句型

5.a 改成 the 句意：如果我選擇等下一班車。特指the next bus

6.other改成another句意：我還要再等30分鐘。Another+數(shù)詞+名詞“另外?

7.do 改成did 時間狀語是Only then用一般過去式：did

8.possible 改成possibly句意：不耐煩可能浪費我們投入的所有的努力。修飾waste用副詞possibly

9.去掉it這是定語從句，that在定語從句中做賓語，去掉it

10.lose改成losing be close to doing幾乎做?，lose改成losing

【英語卷（解析）·2015屆山東省日照一中高三上學期第三次階段復習質量達標檢測（201501）】第一節(jié)短文改錯(共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分)

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共 有10處錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(Λ)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：

1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。

My grandfather and I enjoy fishing.

One Sunday morning we go fishing at a lake. We took ours fishing poles and headed for the lake. As soon as we arrived, so we dropped the lines into the water. Before waiting for about half an hour, I was beginning to get impatiently. I wanted to give up, and my grandfather told me to wait a little longer. Finally, there were a sudden pull at the pole and fish was caught. Within the next few minute, my grandfather also caught a fish. Felt hungry, we built a fire by the lake and barbecued the fish. It was delicious.

【答案】【知識點】D1 短文改錯記敘文

【答案解析】 第二行：1.時態(tài)：go→ went前后時態(tài)一致。2.代詞誤用：ours→our.這里要用our作定語。而ours則不能作定語。

第三行：3.刪掉so,前一分句為as soon as 引導的時間狀語從句，主句前再不需要連詞。4. 介詞誤用Before→After根據(jù)題意是等了半個小時以后，而不是以前。故用After.

第四行：5.副詞誤用:impatiently→impient這里是形容詞和前面的get形成系表結構。6.連詞誤用：and→but根據(jù)句意需要轉折，而不是順承。

第五行：7.主謂一致誤用： were→ was there be 句型中be 和最近的名詞保持一致。8.fish前加a.根據(jù)題意這里是釣了一條魚及根據(jù)fish后的was,故在此加a.

第六行：9.名詞復數(shù)誤用：minute→minutes few修飾的名詞要用復數(shù)形式。

10.非謂語誤用：Felt→Feeling根據(jù)句意，feel 和句子主語之間是主動關系而非被動關系

D2 短文改錯應用文

D3 短文改錯議論文

【英語卷（解析）·2015屆河北省衡水中學高三上學期五調考試（201412）word版】第一節(jié)：短文改錯。

請你改正下面短文中的錯誤。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：

1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。

Dear Editor,

I used to be a physician in the children’s department of a hospital. Form time to time I treated children who had poisoned by medicine with older family members. The children didn’t know the medicine was danger ; they just knew it tasted sweet. Children easily open the bottle what we now use in China.

Some days before I talked about medicines with an American. He showed me a sort of plastic bottle. The design was quite simple and I’m sure our Chinese factories could produce these bottles. The top of the bottle can be opened by pressing down on them while turning. This is difficult for most young children to do so , though grown-up can open these bottles very easily. I’m certainly that the expense of making such tops would be very small. As a doctor , I’d love to see this doing. And most parents would be grateful.

Sincerely yours Li Hua

【答案】【知識點】D3 短文改錯議論文

【文章綜述】本文講述作者是名醫(yī)生對于孩子誤食大人藥物造成中毒感到很痛心，與美國交流后得知有一種瓶蓋可以完全避免這種情況的出現(xiàn)，故寫信給編輯呼吁盡快實施。

【答案解析】

1. had 后面加been考查被動語態(tài)。Be poisoned by 被。。所毒害。

2. with—for考查介詞。句意：時不時，我會收治那些被大人的藥所誤食中

短文改錯:deareditor篇三：2014高考英語二輪專題突破檢測 短文改錯模擬

短文改錯

(建議用時: 40分鐘)

下面短文中有10處語言錯誤。請在有錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。

增加: 在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧), 并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除: 把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改: 在錯的詞下畫一橫線, 并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意: 1. 每句不超過兩個錯誤;

2. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞;

3. 只允許修改10處, 多者(從第11處起)不計分。

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(2013·吉林模擬)

Dear Dad,

You are very busy every day that you never pay enough attention to your health. I was worried about your health all the time. I’d like to give you some advices. I hear that walking is the best sport. Your company isn’t far away from home, is it? Why not to walk to the office? You’d better take exercise at most once a week. You can play a basketball in the gym. Going to swim is a nice choice, too. Trying not to stay up too lately. Having enough sleep can help your brain work better. Of course, this is very important to have healthy food.

Dad, please receive my advice. I really wish you healthy!

Your loving daughter,

Mary

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(2013·廣元模擬)

Yesterday morning I was surprising to hear that my friend Allen had been hit by a car and was in hospital. The other day he is going to cross a street. He was very careful and didn’t go after he saw traffic lights turn green. But when he got the middle of the street he saw a car suddenly appear on her right-hand side and come directly towards him. That was too late for Allen to dodge(躲閃). He was hit

by a car and thrown a few meter away. He was sent to hospital immediate and had an operation. When I went to see him last night, he out of danger but still looked pale.

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(2013·玉溪模擬)

As students, we have classes for early morning till late afternoon. Therefore, take a ten-minute break between class is definitely important, even necessary. Otherwise we may feel both physically or mentally tired. During the ten-minute break we did something to get rid of tiredness. What we need is to have real rest, instead of getting even tired. So don’t do anything that will make you too excited. My ten-minute break is always pleased. I usually take some exercise. Sometime I have a free chat with my classmates. When the new class begins, I feel freshly again.

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(2013·天水模擬)

It’s reported that many people died of traffic accidents each year. Road safety has aroused the widely attention of the public. Many rules have made to reduce the traffic crashes, especially for the ones involved in the pedestrians. In my opinion, we should make road safety seriously in our daily life. While used the road, we must walk on the pavement and learn to protect us. Besides, car drivers should obey the traffic rules, that is both good for themselves and others.

In the word, obeying the traffic rules are what all of us should pay attention to particularly. After all, life is not a small matter.

答案解析

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答案:

Dear Dad,

You are very busy every day that you never pay enough attention to your health.

so I was worried about your health all the time. I’d like to give you some advices. amadvice

I hear that walking is the best sport. Your company isn’t far away from home, is it?

most once a week. You

least

n the gym. Going to swim is a nice choice, too. Trying

Try

not to stay up too lately. Having enough sleep can help your brain work better. Of

late

course, this is very important to have healthy food.

it

Dad, please receive my advice. I really wish you healthy!

accept

Your loving daughter,

Mary

1. 【解析】將第一句中的very改為so。so. . . that引導結果狀語從句。

2. 【解析】將第二句中的was改為am。此處是一般現(xiàn)在時。

3. 【解析】將第三句中的advices改為advice。advice不可數(shù)名詞。

4. 【解析】將第六句中的第一個to去掉。why not+動詞原形, 表示建議。

5. 【解析】將第七句中的most改為least。at least至少。

6. 【解析】將第八句中的a去掉。球類前面不加冠詞。

7. 【解析】將第十句中的Trying改為Try。此處為祈使句, 動詞原形開頭。

8. 【解析】將第十句中的lately改為late。late表示時間晚。

9. 【解析】將第十二句中的this改為it。it是形式主語。

10. 【解析】將第十三句中的receive改為accept。接受意見用accept。

2

答案: Yesterday morning I was surprising to hear that my friend Allen had been hit

surprised by a car and was in hospital. The other day he is going to cross a street. He was very

was

careful and didn’t go after he saw traffic lights turn green. But when he got ∧the

beforeto middle of the street he saw a car suddenly appear on her right-hand side and come

his directly towards him. That was too late for Allen to dodge(躲閃). He was hit

It by a car and thrown a few meter away. He was sent to hospital immediate and had the metersimmediately

an operation. When I went to see him last night, he ∧out of danger but still looked

was

pale.

1. 【解析】第一句中的surprising→surprised 修飾人時, 要用-ed形容詞, 意為“感到吃驚的”。

2. 【解析】第二句中的is→was 時間狀語the other day說明事情發(fā)生在過去, 故用一般過去時。

3. 【解析】第三句中的after→before 根據(jù)句意“他看到綠燈亮之前沒穿過馬路�！笨芍�用before。

4. 【解析】第四句中got后加to get to到達, 為固定搭配。

5. 【解析】第四句中的her→his 根據(jù)前文可知我的朋友Allen是男(轉 載 于:www.zuancaijixie.com 蒲 公英文 摘:短文改錯:deareditor)性。

6. 【解析】第五句中的That→It 分析句子結構可知真正的主語為后面的不定式, 故采用形式主語it。

7. 【解析】第六句中的第一個a→the 特指前面已經提到的汽車, 用定冠詞the。

8. 【解析】第六句中的meter→meters meter為可數(shù)名詞, a few修飾可數(shù)名詞復數(shù)。

9. 【解析】第七句中的immediate→immediately 修飾動詞要用副詞。

10. 【解析】在第八句中的he后加was 根據(jù)并列連詞but可知其前面應為完整的句子, 此處是主系表結構, 根據(jù)上下文時態(tài)和主謂一致, 故加was。

3

答案:

As students, we have classes for early morning till late afternoon. Therefore,

from take a ten-minute break between class is definitely important, even necessary. taking classes

Otherwise we may feel both physically or mentally tired. During the ten-minute break

and

we did something to get rid of tiredness. What we need is to have ∧ real rest, instead

doa

of getting even ∧ 或tired. So don’t do anything that will make you too excited.

more

My ten-minute break is always pleased. I usually take some exercise. Sometime I

pleasingSometimes

have a free chat with my classmates. When the new class begins, I feel freshly again.

fresh

1. 【解析】將第一句中的for改為from。from. . . till固定結構, 從??到?? 。

2. 【解析】將第二句中的take改為taking。構成v. -ing短語作主語。

3. 【解析】將第二句中的class改為classes。在兩節(jié)課之間。

4. 【解析】將第三句中的or改為and。并列關系, 與前面的both構成both. . . and. . . 。

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