短文改錯，deardiana

短文改錯，deardiana篇一：09-13年遼寧高考短文改錯及答案

新題型2009—2013遼寧高考短文改錯

2013年遼寧高考短文改錯

Mr. Johnson is a hardworking teacher. Every day, he spends too much time with his work. With little sleep and hardly any break, so he works from morning till night. Hard work have made him very ill. “He has ruined his healthy. We are worried about him.” That is which other teachers say. Yesterday afternoon, I paid visit to Mr. Johnson. I was eager to see him, but outside her room I stopped. I had to calm myself down. Quietly I step into the room. I saw him lying in bed, looking at some of the picture we had taken together. I understood that he missed us just as many as we missed him.

2012年遼寧高考短文改錯

Dear Diana,

Thank you for the lovely day we have with you. It was so kind for you to let us bring Anne’s friend, Gina. Unfortunate, the only problem was the journey home. There had been a terrible accident on the high way and, for a result, there was a long line of traffic for at least six mile. In the end, we drove to a service station and waited there unless the road was clear. In the car park here Gina nearly got knocked over as car drove out far too quickly from behind a lorry. They finally dropped Gina off at her parents’ and made our own way to home.

Much love,

Fiona

2011年遼寧高考短文改錯

In early January this year, the rate of UFO reports were steady, around three per weeks. When, however, on Monday, January 16, a science fiction film about visitors to outer space was shown on television, there was the immediate increase in reports of sightings from all parts of the States. The commanding officer, Wayne Tyler, who directly responsible for the study of all such reports, decided to making his findings known. They wrote an article, which said that all UFO reports could be explained for quite naturally by aircraft movements. Follow this explanation, there was a rapid drop in the number of reported sightings, because the rate remained above the previous leve.

2010年遼寧高考短文改錯

Christine was just a girl in one of my classes. I never knew much about her except for that she was strange. She didn’t talk many. Her hair was strangeand purple. And she worn black sports shoes and a black sweater, although in summer. She was, in fact, rather attractively, and she never seemed care whatthe rest of us thought about her. Like the rest of my classmate, I didn’t really want to get closest to her. It was only when we did their chemistry projecttogether that I begin to understand why Christine dressed the way she did.

2009年遼寧高考短文改錯

When I was in high school, most of my friend had bicycles. I hope I could also have it. One day, I saw a second-hand bicycle, that was only 100 yuan. I asked my fatherthe money. But he said he could only give me half of the money. He should find the otherhalf myself. So I went to sell newspapers after the school. My father was pleased if I showed him the money a month after. He gives me the other fifty. You can imagine how much happy I was when I rode to school with my own bicycle.

2013：答案

1. with—on2. 去掉so 3. have—has 4. healthy—health 5. which—what

6. paid后加a 7. her—his 8. step—stepped 9. picture—pictures 10. many—much

2012：答案

1. have→had 2. for→of3. Unfortunate→Unfortunately4. for→as5. mile→miles

6. unless→until 7. here→there8. car前加a9. they→we 10.去掉to

2011：

答案

1. were—was 2. weeks—week 3. to—from 4. the—an 5. 加was或is 6. making—make 7. They—He 8. 去掉for 9. Follow—Following 10. because—although/though/but/yet

2010：

答案

1. 去掉（except）for 2. many—much3. worn—wore 4. although—even

5. attractively—attractive 6. 加to (care) 7. classmate—classmates 8. closest—close

9. their—our 10. begin—began

2009：

答案

1. friend—friends 2. it—one 3. that—which 4. 加for(the money) 5. He—I

6. 去掉the (school) 7.if—when 8. after—later 9. gives—gave 10. 去掉much

新題型2009—2013遼寧高考七選五

2013年遼寧高考七選五

Forgiveness

To forgive is a virtue, but no one has ever said it is easy．When someone has deeply hurt you, it can be extremely difficult to let go of your hate．However, forgiveness is possible, and it can be surprisingly beneficial to your physical and mental health．People who forgive show less sadness, anger and stress and more hopefulness, according to a recent research． Calm yourself．that gives you pleasure: a beautiful scene in nature, or someone you love．

Don’t wait for an apology．Many times the person who hurt you does not intend to apologize．They may have wanted to hurt you or they just don’t see things the same way．Keep in mind that forgiveness does not necessarily mean becoming friends again with the person who upset you．

Take the control away from your offender（冒犯者）．Rethinking about you hurt gives power to the person who causes you pain．Instead of focusing on your mounded feelings, learn to look for the love, beauty and kindness around you． out of unawareness, fear, and even love．You may want to write a letter to yourself from your offender’s point of view．

Don’t forget to forgive yourself．if you don’t do it．

A．Why should you forgive?

B．How should you start to forgive?

C．Recognize the benefits of forgiveness．

D．Try to see things from you offender’s angle．

E．For some people, forgiving themselves is the biggest challenge．

F．To make your anger die away, try a simple stress-management technique．

G．If you wait for people to apologize, you could be waiting an awfully long time．

How to Make Friends

Friendship is a very important human relationship and everyone needs good friends．Good friendship has many benefits．It offers companionship, improves self-worth and promotes good health．There are times in our lives such as when we have recently moved into a new town, or changed our jobs or schools．Such changes often leaves us without a friend But for many of us the process is difficult and requires courage．Below are some helpful suggestions on how to make and keep friends．

1．Associate with others．

The first step to making friends is associating with other people．You can go to public places to meet new people．Besides, you will need to make yourself known by becoming an active member of such places．

2. Start a conversation

Starting a conversation is the second most important step in making new friends．You can always start the conversation．Being able to make small talk is a very useful skill in relating with other people．

3. Choosing friends with common interests is important in building friendship as these interests would always bring you and your friend together, Hanging out will always be a pleasant experience．

4. Let it grow．

It is a good thing to stay in touch．However, try not to press your new friend with calls, messages or visits as this would likely wear him or her out and finally you may lose your friend．The best friendships are the ones that grow naturally．

5. Enjoy your friendship

The best way to enjoy your friendship is to allow your friends to be themselves．Try not to change them from who they are to what you want them to be．Become the kind of friend you will want your friend to be to you．

A．Be cheerful． B．Do things together． C．Do not wait to be spoken to． D．Try not to find fault with your friends．

E．Making new friends comes easy for some people．

F．For a friendship to develop you need to stay in touch．

G．So you will need to give your friend time to react to you．

Everyone is forgetful, but as we age, we start to feel like our brains are slowing down a bit— Read on for some techniques worth trying.

1．

People who regularly made plans and looked forward to upcoming events had a 50 percent reduced chance of Alzheimer's disease (早老性癡呆癥), according to a recent study. Something as simple as setting a goal to have a weekly coffee date with a friend will do. There's evidence that people who have a purpose in life or who are working on long or short-term goals appear to do better. In other words, keep your brain looking forward.

2．Go for a walk. Mildly raised glucose (葡萄糖) levels can harm the area of the brain that helps you form memories and physical activity can help get blood glucose down to normal levels. In fact,

3．Learn something new. Take a Spanish class online, join a drawing club, or learn to play cards. A study found that mental stimulation (刺激) limits the weakening effects of aging on memory and the mind. But the best thing for your brain is when you learn something new and are physically active at the Or go dancing with your friends.

A．Focus on the future. B．This can be espocially harmful to the aged. C．It should be something like learning gardening. D．So take a few minutes each day to do some reading. E．But don't worry if your schedule isn't filled with life-changing events. F．Luckily, research shows there is a lot you can do to avoid those moments. G．In other words, when you take care of your body, you take care of your brain.

短文改錯，deardiana篇二：2010年—2012年高考英語短文改錯匯總

2012年高考英語短文改錯匯編

課標(biāo)卷

I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive. From

the time I was about four until I was about six, I destroyed each of my toy. I

was happy when the toys worked, but when things did wrong, I got angry and

broke it. For a while parents bought me new toys. But before long they began

to see which was happening. When I tear apart my fifth birthday toy train, my

father said, "That's it. No more toys to you." My punishment lasted a year.

Meanwhile, I found out that with more patience I must make my toys to last.

My attitude changed from then on.

參考答案： less toys ∧wrong, I got angry and

went/go ∧ parents bought me new toys. But before long they began

them my what tore for could/might

My attitude changed from then on.

大綱卷

Dear Editor,

I’m writing to tell you opinion about water saving. 76.______

Water is important. We, as well as animal, cannot live 77.______

without water and neither agriculture or industry can go 78.______

without it. Yet it seemed water is becoming less and less. 79.______

Many countries in the world find we don’t have enough water. 80.______

To deal with a problem, I think, we should first go all 81.______

out to plant trees though trees will help save water. Next, no 82.______

drinking water should be left running. Third, we should find 83.______

ways to reuse the water using in washing, especially bath 84.______

water for which is quite a lot, and that will save much water. 85.______

Sincerely,

Li Hua

Dear Editor,

參考答案：

I’m writing to tell you∧opinion about water saving. don’t have enough water. 8drinking water should be left running. Third, we should find water for which is quite a lot, and that will save much water.

Sincerely,

Li Hua

重慶卷

Dear Grandpa,

How are you those days? I have been missing you very 76._________ much after I went to college a year ago. Whenever I think of 77._________ the old days, I feel very happily. I still remember when I 78._________ was child, you always held me in your arms and told me stories79._________ till I fall asleep. We often went to the fields to enjoy the pleasant 80._________ view there. You told me the name of different plants and their 81._________ characteristics. Gradually, I became interesting in biology 82._________ and chose to learn biology when I entered into the college. Now 83.________ my friend Ann, together with me, are going to do field study 84.________ and the findings will be use as materials for our research. Since 85.________ we’ll do the study in our hometown, I hope to see you by then.

Yours,

參考答案：

短文改錯

Dear Grandpa,

How are you those days? I have been missing you 76. these very

much after I went to college a year ago. Whenever I think 77. since of

78. happy

79. a

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till I fall asleep. We often went to the fields to enjoy the 80. fellpleasant

view there. You told me the name of different plants and 81. namestheir

characteristies. Gradually, I became interesting in biology 82.

interested

and chose to learn biology I entered into the 83. into college. Now

my friend Ann, together with me, are going to do field 84. is study

and the findings will be use as materials for our research. 85. usedSince

we’ll do the study in our homewown, I hope to see you by

then.

Yours,

Daisy

遼寧卷

Dear Diana,

Thank you for the lovely day we have with you. It was so kind tor you to let us bring Anne's

friend. Gina. Unfortunate, the only problem was the journey home. There had been a terrible

accident on the highway and, for a result, there was a long line of traffic for at least six mile. In

the end, we drove to a service station and waited there unless the road was clear. In the car park

Gina nearly got knocked over as A car drove out far too quickly from behind a lorry. They

finally dropped Gina off at her parents' and made our own way to home.

參考答案：

1．第1句have→had【解析】由后面的was可知，這兒應(yīng)該用過去時態(tài)。

2. 第2句 for→of【解析】It’s kind of you為固定用法。

3. 第3句 Unfortunate→Unfortunately【解析】這兒用副詞作狀語。

4. 第4句 for→as【解析】as a result固定搭配。

5. 第4句 mile→miles【解析】mile是可數(shù)名詞，并且前面是six.

6. 第5句 unless→until【解析】這兒后面一句是一個時間狀語從句，意思是我們一直等到路通了。

7. 第6句 here→there【解析】敘述的是別的地方發(fā)生的事，所以用there.

8. 第6句 car前加a【解析】car不是特指，并且是可數(shù)名詞，所以前面要加a.

9. 第7句 they→we【解析】敘述的是我們做的事，所以用we.

10. 第7句去掉to【解析】make one’s way home中home為副詞，所以前面不用介詞to。

陜西卷

My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month. It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport.

We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath. What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email messages every day. I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing. The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish.

It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing. last month.

visited 參考答案：

It is in it is easy to go anywhere from the hotel by public transport.

so/and 去掉to

We lived in double-room with a big bath. What I liked best

Comfortable was

free high-speed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email messages wonderful with

with takendishes

It is such ∧ to Beijing.

a mine

四川卷

Dear Mom,

Mother’s Day is coming. I’m sorry that I am abroad

_________

and can’t send your flowers, so I’m writing to you.

_________

Mom, I know I have never expressed my thank to you

_________

before. But on today, at this special time, I just want to tell

_________

you loudly: I love you, Mom! Thank you so much by not

_________

only giving me life, but also teach me how to be a good

_________

person. Thank you for all you had done for me. Mom, though

_________

I may often say it, I do love you. Nobody can take your

_________

part in my heart. Whenever I am, I will always love you.

_________

Hope you good health and much happiness every day!

_________

Your little girl,

Jennifer

【答案與解析】

66. 正確。 67. your改為you�？疾榇�詞。此處動詞send接雙賓語，應(yīng)使用賓格形式，構(gòu)成短語send sb. sth.。68. thank改為thanks。考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù)�！氨磉_感謝”應(yīng)為：express one’s thanks。 69. 去掉on�？疾榻樵~。在副詞today之前不用介詞，故去掉。

70. by改為for。考查介詞。Thank sb. for…為固定短語“因…而感謝”。

71. teach改為teaching。考查非謂語動詞。此處是but連接的用于介詞之后的并列的動名詞形式。 72. had改為have。考查動詞時態(tài)。全篇文章屬于現(xiàn)在的時態(tài)，故將過去完成時改為現(xiàn)在完成時。 73. may后加not。考查句意。句意為：媽媽，雖然我可能沒有經(jīng)常說，但我確實很愛你。 74. Whenever改為Wherever。考查連詞。根據(jù)句意：無論我在哪里，我總是愛你的。 75. Hope改為Wish�？疾閯釉~辨析。動詞hope后不能接雙賓語，應(yīng)用wish符合語境和語法規(guī)則。 浙江卷66. 67. 68. 69. 70. 71. 72. 73. 74. 75.

短文改錯，deardiana篇三：短文改錯專項訓(xùn)練

短文改錯專項訓(xùn)練

下列短文中至少有十處語言錯誤，每句最多有兩處。每處改錯襟涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（︿）,并在其下面寫出該加的詞. 刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉.

修改:在錯的詞下面畫一橫線,并在該詞下面下出修改后的詞. 注意:1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞;

2.只允許修改十處,多者(從第十一處算起)不計分. 短文一

Dear Jim Jing，

Your problem is common one among middle school students. Maybe the following advices can help you . First in all ,believe in yourself. Your greatest problem is that you lack self-confidence. The first thing you must do it is to smile at your classmates. One smile speaks loud about your wish to make friends than any word. Your smile will show that you are friendly to him.Next, trying talking with a student who is as shy as you or who share the same interests with you. You can discuss your studies with a classmate and you can also talking talk about your hobbies. Unless anyone is in trouble . you should be ready to help him or her. Once you have confidence, you can make as many friends as possibly.

Yours,

Lily

短文二

Great changes have been taken place ti the way people communicate each other. In the past people write letters to share informations and later they talked with each other on the telephone. Now more and more people use our own mobile phones to communicating. And instead writing on the paper, they e-mail to each other on the computer. As a result, people find that quicker and easier to communicate, and at the same time some people feel that they become-poorer in writing.

短文三

Dear Mr Simth:

How are you? As a exchange student, I am writing to tell you I would prefer to move into a single room in next term, as I find it inconvenient to share a room with others. My roommate often held parties at night. Made much noise. Besides, his friends are always visiting him, that disturbs problem. If you think in my position,I am sure he will aree that the only solution for me is to get a room of my own, one not in the same builing and as near to the school campus as possible. I would be gratefully whether you could do me the favor.

Your sincerely,

Li Ming

短文四

Dear Diana,

Thank you for the lovely day we have with you. It was so kind for you to let us bring Anne?s friend, Gina. Unfortunate the only problem was the journey home. There had been a terrible accident on the highway and, for a result, there was a long line of traffic for at least six mile. In the end, we drove to a service station and waited there unless the road was clear. In the car park here Gina nearly got knocked over as car drove out far too quickly from behind a lorry. They finally dropped Gina off at her parents? and made our own way to home.

Much love,

Fiona

短文五

My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last mouth. It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport.

We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath. What I liked best were the free

high-speed Internet connection in the room. I checked my e-mail messages every day. I also shared for my friends many photos talking in Beijing. The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish.

It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing.

短文六

Chrustine was just a girl in one of my classes. I never knew much about her except for that she was strange. She didn?t talk many. Her hair was black and purple, and she worn black sports shones and a black sweater, although in summer.

She was , in fact, rather attractively, and she never seemed care what the rest of us thought about her. Like the rest of my classmste, I didn?t really want to get closest to her. It was only when we did their chemistry project together that I begin to understand why Christina dressed the way she did.

短文七

Different people have different oponions about if Peking Opera should be added as a course in primary and secondary schools. We hold a discussion on it the other day.

Some students supports the project wholehearted. They think Peking Opera can help promote Chinese culture because it has long history and is rich in traditional culture. Beside, Peking Opera shows different arts.

Others hold a different opinion. He think students should have freedom to choose what to learn. If they are forcing to learn, their learning interesting can be damaged. They also argue that there are have many local operas all over China. Different local operas can be taught in different areas to pass down Chinese traditional culture.

短文八

I like music very much, pop songs particularly. Every eveing then I am doing homework and at weekends whem I at home, I always play some of my favorite songs on my tape recorder. The familiar patterns of notes attract m into the colorfully world of music. Now and then I stopped to follow the songs. Sometimes, my mother comes in, asked me to fix my attention to my homework. She does not like the pop music. Like most grown-ups, she enjoys folk songs, because the peaceful music reminds her of their beautiful life when she was young. It is a truth which people of different age understand music differently and enjoy different kinds of music.

短文九

Some of us are having problems with our parents, as they often looked into our school bags or read our diary. I fully understand that why we are not comfortable about it, but there

?s no need to feel too sadly. Our parents are checking our bags or diaries make sure we?re not getting into any trouble. You have probably heard some horrible stories about other kids and thought we might do same. Or perhaps they just want to connect with us and are doing it all wrong. My suggestion is: Tell them we want them to trust us as many as we?d like to trust them. If you don?t think you can

—they are bound to read it.

短文十

Mary bought some pork from the market near her four hours before. As usual, she smelled the pork after the butcher handed them to her. It had smelled well then, but later, it didn?t. She wrapped up the pork and return to the market. She went up to the same bucher and asked him to smell the pork. He said it was smelled okay and gave it back to her. She called the manage, told him that he needed to hire butchers who had worse noses. He smelled the pork and apologized

?t smell anything so he had a cold. 短文十一

I will share with you a true story that happened a couple of day ago. One of my classmate bought a bag of snacks from a food store. A few roommates were then invited to enjoy snacks. Unluckily, all of them got poisoned and had stomachaches with our faces pale. They are quickly

sent to a nearby hospital. Doctors examined them but gave them some medicine. They were out of danger soon before taking the medicine. This accident should make us to realize the seriousness of

短文十二|（2013浙江）

Dear Diary,

Here I am in the middle of a city, 350 miles far away from our farmhouse. Do youwant to know why we move last week? Dad lost his job, and as Mom explained, “ He was lucky tofind other one.” His new job meant I had to say goodbye to my classmate, my school or just everything else I love in the world. To make matters bad, now I have to share a room with my younger sister, Maggie. Tomorrow is first day of school. I am awfully tiring, but I know I?ll never fall asleep. Good night and remember, you, dear diary, is my only souvenir from my past life

Mr Johnson is a hardworking teacher. Every day, he spends too much time with his

work. With little sleep and hardly any break, so he works from morning till night. Hard work have made him very ill. “ He has ruined his healthy. We are worried about him.That is which other teachers say. Yesterday afternoon, I paid visit to Mr. Johnson. I was eager to see him, but outside her room I stopped. I had to calm myself down. Quietly I step into the

room. I saw him lying in bed, looking at some of the picture we had taken together. I understood that he missed us just as many as we missed him.

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